Love Story

[betelin_notecor]

Title: Love Story
Main Pairing: James/Scorpius
Wordcount: ~5,000
Genre: romance, fluff
Warnings: none
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: All characters belong to J.K. Rowlings and related entities. I made no money on this fic.
Notes: This fic was prompted by brixisxonfire for her birthday. Happy early birthday, Bri! She gave me the prompt James/Scorpius songfic to Taylor

Comments

[betelin_notecor]

XD! I'm glad you like it! I was surprised at being able to write a fluffy b-day fic... since most of them end up WAAAAY too angsty, but I like this one. XD

*hugs* Happy b-day and thanks for an awesome prompt!

[maevemist]

I am in love. Your James is just perfect in this and I am willing to fight Scorpius for him in a duel if need be. lol

I agree with Bri the dancing and the kissing and the characterizations are all just...Guh.

Little moments I like best

*He held his hand between him, offering it to Scorpius. "I don't want to dance with a girl."
* The secret hidden garden
* The whole cussing!Scorpius scene but this bit in particular
Scorpius glared at him. “That was my first drink. It was a butterbeer.”

Lily Potter smirked at him. “You’re a lightweight then.”

“I’m not fucking drunk!” Scorpius reached out for his glass again, intending to break it again, but Albus held it out of reach.

“Listen, mate. I don’t think you’re sober. You’re using Muggle curse words. American Muggle curse words.”* oh and let's not forget the song, I have recently discovered Taylor Swift myself and after recieving her CD for Christmas I see much potential for song ficcage surrounding her music

[betelin_notecor]

This James was such fun to write! I do love Jamie, no matter what he acts like. XD

And Taylor Swift is SOOOO awesome. I love all of her stuff. I'd love to write fics to all of her songs. XD They are each a little story in a song, which makes them so awesome. [/end fangirling] lol!

*hugs* Thank you! ♥

[nolagal]

I don't know the song but the fic was perfect. I love James being the sorta practical one and Scorpius, so melodramatic and fabulous. I loved their dance and their first kiss. Just wonderful!!

[betelin_notecor]

*hugs* Thank you! I thought that making Scorp very fandom!Draco like would be fun. XD

And James is only sorta practical because he finally grew up. lol! I see James-the-second-year being completely immature (hence his playing a prank on Scorp back then. XD)

[p01s0n3d]

Ahhhh! The happy-ending-fairytales are out to smother me with their happy sparkles. Oh my poor heart is being enraptured by the glittery sparkles of loooooove. *Black soul evaporates into the bright light of The Happy. AKA dies*

Besides my melodrama, the story is awesome. It's uplifting in a way that's leaving me bereft of words. I think I like the characterization of Scorp the most though. How he's stubborn, but at the same time a romantic at heart.... Iunno. Ignore my fanboyish ramblings. :D

[betelin_notecor]

lol! The fluff kills me too. Don't worry... my next fic is angsty and distraught. XDD

Scorp was fun to write. I haven't written a Scorp quite like him before, and I quite like him. =)

*hugs*

[p01s0n3d]

Yay! Angst! *flails*

ohhhhh

[kitt_abthence]

Oh that was just lovely dear!
I loath that song with a burning passion in my nether regions. Or any regions for that matter, but I simply adore this story.
The characters were perfect.
Great job love!

-Kitt

Re: ohhhhh

[betelin_notecor]

XD Well, the best part about song fics is just ignoring the song (that's why I left it in big chunks, so it was easy to avoid. =P) I really don't like song fics myself, but it was a request, so I did it.

I'm glad you liked the story itself though! Thank you for commenting! =)