Numb

[betelin_notecor]

Title: Numb
Main pairing: Sirius/Remus
Word count: ~7,500
Genre: angst, romance
Warnings: slight dub-con in minor pairing
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All characters belong to J.K. Rowlings and related entities. I made no money on this fic.
Notes: This fic was prompted by aldehyde for her birthday. Happy birthday, Moonal! Sorry your b-day fic ended up being a bit

Comments

[hpaa]

This was awesome..
Your Sirius makes me want to cry, the poor soul.... Well at least he does get his Remus at the end :)

[betelin_notecor]

*pets* Sorry it made you wanna cry!

I'm glad you liked it though! ♥ Thank you for commenting. =)

[brighty18]

Oh, that is very sweet. Poor Sirius!

This little bit made me smile: Sirius walked over to the bed and looked down at Remus. His book was upside down. His smile grew. “You.”

“What are you on about?” Remus flipped a few more pages. The book was still upside down.

“You’re the bastard.”

Remus stiffened. “I said I was sorry.”

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you! I enjoyed writing that bit too. =P I'm glad you liked it!

[aldehyde]

YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

see, i was so happy and excited, i hit the submit button before i finished my comment!

*hugs*

omg this fic is amazing! you channeled the angst perfectly - this is COMPLETELY the type of r/s story i always love the most. your sirius is just brilliant - with his insecurities and need for affection and his opinions on remus being the most perfect thing ever. thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much for writing this for me!!!

[betelin_notecor]

XD I'm glad you like it! Sirius is definitely a bad character for me to write... I don't think I got "him" at all. But as long as you're happy, I'm happy! =P

*hugs* Happy Birthday!

[p01s0n3d]

That was so sweet, but angsty at the same time. It's balanced out I guess. I think I like insecure!Sirius.....

[betelin_notecor]

lol! It wasn't sweet until the end at least!

I don't like writing Sirius. I don't like him as a character and I can't quite capture "him". Ugh. Pain in the butt. XD

[lanenk]

*sniffle* This was really good! Your depiction of Sirius and his struggle with himself... sooo wonderful! I'm glad it had a happy ending. <3

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed. ♥