Eight New Years

Jan 01, 2009 19:07

Title: Eight New Years
Main pairing: Albus Severus/Scorpius
Word count: ~10,000
Genre: angst, fluff, romance
Warnings: none
Rating: pg-13
Disclaimer: All characters belong to J.K.R. and related entities. I made no money on this fic.
Notes: This fic was prompted by love_stoned0_0 as a prize for taking part in the ass_carnival. I'm sorry it was a bit late babe... I just fail ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, ship: albus severus/scorpius, character: albus severus, fanfiction: one-shot, character: scorpius

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nolagal January 2 2009, 01:27:04 UTC
*Gives Albus some pepto and pets him*
Fabulous story, I love how it's all train trips and new years eves. Albus not realizing he loved Scorpius even when he threw a fit about Louis. I love the recycled Topaz, she's so great to dump and you reused "not the brightest lumos"!!!
So sweet and happy. I love the boys!!!!

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betelin_notecor January 2 2009, 01:29:46 UTC
I needed to write faster, so I had to recycle. I was like, "Why think up a new character name when I have Topaz to torture again?" XDDD

And it's not my best, but I wrote 10,000 words in 3 days, so I'm pretty proud. It needs a beta like WHOA. XD I'll have to pester Lucy to look over it for me. =P

*hugs* I'm glad you liked it!

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nolagal January 2 2009, 01:32:53 UTC
I noticed a few things but I didn't keep track of them *shrugs* nothing too distracting, i think there was a "set" instead of "sit" 10,000 in 3 days is awesome and it's a pretty darn cute story with poor vomiting Albus.

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betelin_notecor January 2 2009, 01:34:43 UTC
I love making Albus vomit. Not sure why, but I do.

And thanks for the set/sit... I'll go through tomorrow when I'm not fully exhausted and fix things... I just wanted to get it up before New Years was over. XD

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Re: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! betelin_notecor January 2 2009, 06:27:14 UTC
*huggles* I'm glad you liked it! I tried to toss in little things that I thought you'd like... I'm glad they all worked! (I thought that the freckled penises were particularly inspired.)

And responding to comments at 1:30 AM makes my brain go numb. Seriously. XDD

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Re: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! anonymous January 2 2009, 13:44:11 UTC
Yeah, it was awesome. I tried to comment and read at the same time so I could tell you all the things I loved but then it was taking away from the story so I stopped. I'm going to read it again :D and probably comment again. I'm going to read it when I'm alone in my room so I can fully appreciate it.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you could work in the holiday festivities. They New Year's Eve parties were awesome.

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Re: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! betelin_notecor January 2 2009, 17:50:22 UTC
*hugs* I'm just glad it works for you since it wasn't what you originally asked for. =)

And I was honestly trying to post the fic ON New Year's Eve, but my family was not cooperating with my wish to write. >.>

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maevemist January 2 2009, 02:19:32 UTC
The mention of Asti in the first section brought back some memories let me tell you, my mind was saying at least it wasn't passion pop! that would have been a real problem.

Louis!!! Now I want to read lots and lots of Louis stories, why am I so easily intrigued by new pairng suggestions?

Drunken George and Ron is for the win gods I love my Weasley's.

I loved that you brought back Topaz and sickly Albus he is just to cute for words and Scorpius being so sexually aware at such a young age is also fabulous.

hmm what else...

The kids all congrating in the Orange Room, Snow Angels, Scorpius realising after 6 years of hanging out with the Weasley/Potter's that he had never actually spoken to Lily LOLz, The whole Next Gen crew all being Cadbury's when it comes to alcohol (a glass and a half and they are smashed). All these things are wonderful and I could come up with more but to do so I might as well copy and paste the whole fic and comment on each sentence :P

Love love love this.

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betelin_notecor January 2 2009, 06:30:16 UTC
I just thought of Asti because it's what my parents always drink on Christmas and New Years. It's much too tart for me. I like the fake, fruity wines that are more juice than wine. XDD

*pets* You just love the Weasley boys, no matter which one is mentioned. XD And Louis gets no love. Why do people throw hate on the non-epilogue next gen? T_T I want more minor cousins! XD

*huggles* And I think you covered just about everything there, lol! I'm glad you liked it that much! =DD

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tiger_flame January 2 2009, 06:44:25 UTC
WOO I love!!! I will tell you all when I don't have work the next day... *hugs close* LOVE YOU

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betelin_notecor January 2 2009, 16:45:04 UTC
*huggles* Love you too! I'll send you this for a beta sometime tonight... I need to do my own clean up of it first. This was slapped up here as soon as it was done, and I just know it's riddled with problems. =P

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p01s0n3d January 2 2009, 21:22:33 UTC
My brain is not being normal right now: I burst into mad hysterics sometime in the middle of reading this and I'm pretty sure it's because something was funny (that's not to say that it wasn't unfunny. My brain is just short-circuiting).....

That was such a fun read. It's been a while since I've read anything with humor in it at all... Sicky Albus is just so cute <3 Gah! The whole thing is cute... <3

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betelin_notecor January 4 2009, 01:18:35 UTC
XDD Well, I'm glad it was funny to your broken brain! =P

I'm glad you liked it and the humour factor though! It's basically crack, but I surprisingly like it. XD

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p01s0n3d January 5 2009, 19:12:27 UTC
Crack is a lot more nonsensical than that. That made sense, even if I snapped in the middle of it...

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