Shooting Star

Jan 16, 2009 13:33

Title: Shooting Star
Rating: G
Genre: General
Characters: Lily Luna, Hugo
Notes: Unbetaed at the moment, but an updated version will be posted ASAP. This is a birthday fic for rules_of_jinx. Happy Birthday, Love!

Summary: Lily can see every future in the stars, except her own.

Shooting Star )

character: lily ii, fanfiction: one-shot, character: hugo, rating: g

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supergreak January 17 2009, 03:23:53 UTC
Spectacular. Really hits the spot, y'know?

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betelin_notecor January 17 2009, 03:55:21 UTC
Thank you! And I do know... writing this was a bit cathartic for me. =D

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tiger_flame January 17 2009, 05:40:00 UTC
*hugs*

So...I'm a horrid beta...*flushes*

I'm so so sorry I didn't send this back to you in time, but I don't see anything wrong with it! *grins*

Next time you send it to me, I look at it right away, that way I don't forget *bows head*

I love you?

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betelin_notecor January 17 2009, 17:45:18 UTC
*hugs* You've been busy and cold, so no probs. I wasn't worried about it much anyway, since it was such a short piece. =)

*huggles* Love you too!

But... you forgot to tell me if you like the fic itself! XDDD

Does that mean you don't like it...? =(

XD

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tiger_flame January 19 2009, 08:05:32 UTC
Oh I do like it! I love the way Lilly is all insecure and Hugo is all-knowing *grins*

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betelin_notecor January 19 2009, 20:06:36 UTC
*hugs* Thanks love. =D

I really like these two here. They might just be my new characterizations of them. =)

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ginny112 January 17 2009, 06:12:38 UTC
I loved it. I really liked the way you charactersied Lily. And Hugo is such a sweetheart. Lily is really lucky to have him as a friend. I think I'll be fangirling your Hugo all day now. :)

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betelin_notecor January 17 2009, 17:46:29 UTC
I love Hugo. He is just so adorable. I'm not sure how he can be so calm when he's got Ron and Hermione for parents though. XDD

And I really like this Lily too! I've never really known what I wanted to do with Lily, but I think I'll be keeping this one. =D

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rules_of_jinx January 19 2009, 07:24:19 UTC
so late but...
i love lily (obvi) and i'm so glad that i encouraged you to create a characterization of her that you like! and i think she's awesome. it would also be cool to kind of figure out how she ended up this way, or where she goes from here. :) cuz you totally need more random things to write purely for my pleasure. lol

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betelin_notecor January 19 2009, 20:07:25 UTC
XDD!

I shall have to write more about her... sometime when I don't have half a bazillion things to do. XDD

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