black hole // fall out boy

[betexxnoire]

black hole
419 // PG
for Feb 6th.
Patrick and Pete gen. I actually wrote this about a week ago, but I haven't had time to post it up. By the way, Happy Saint Patrick's Day!
By the way, I don't any of this, and I don't claim to know the boys. Good thing this is, y'know, fiction.

Patrick gets a call at one o’clock in the morning from a shaky Pete. He

Comments

[almightychrissy]

(ow. ow. ow.)

I would demand more, but it would almost be like bursting this perfect bubble of despair and helplessness you have going on here. This is wonderful.

[betexxnoire]

Oh, thanks. I'm glad you liked it. :]

[bestthingaround]

oh, wow. beautiful. you really capture the moment and the desparity here.
lovely.

[betexxnoire]

Thanks. I wasn't too sure how good this would go, because I prefer writing happy things, but it was a good change. Sad, but good.

[betexxnoire]

Thanks! :]

[theaerosolkid]

I liked this lots :) I don't really know if there's any specificity to why I liked it, but it rang pretty true, and that's always nice.

[betexxnoire]

I'm glad it felt real to you, that was what I was trying to accomplish. Thanks for reading!

[leighannenoelle]

I'm sure this has really happened. Maybe not exactly, but we all know it has. You wrote it very well.

[betexxnoire]

Thanks. :]