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Next Time (Cookleta)

Mar 28, 2010 01:17

Title: Next Time
Author: beth_archangel
Pairing: Cook/Archuleta
Rating: G - NC17 (Trust me. It starts fluffy, and finishes hot)
Summary: When Cook suggests spicing up dinner, Archie has no idea what his boyfriend's got in mind.
Notes: Requested by nieliegen. (I hope I succeeded in fufilling your craving, bb) Helped immensely by the just as lovely churchslackzluv. Thank you so much bb ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, rating: g

Comments 17

withoutmywingsx March 31 2010, 23:18:22 UTC

Oh...boy. :D

I loved this. It was fantastic bb! <333333

beth_archangel March 31 2010, 23:25:28 UTC

OMGSH. *hides*
Thank you so much bb!
I'm glad you enjoyed :D

abovetheruins April 1 2010, 00:28:16 UTC

Oh. Oh my goodness, yes. Loved this <3 Especially that last line XD

beth_archangel April 1 2010, 00:39:23 UTC

*squees*
Yay!
And, lol, that line was the first thing I thought of XD

churchslackzluv April 1 2010, 00:33:05 UTC

OH. MY. GOSH. -FLAILS AT YOU-

YOU...YOU FINISHED IT! AND YOU DEDICATED IT TO ME OMGOSH -FALLS TOP KNEES AND CRIES- -GETS BACK UP, STRAIGHTENS HAIR AND CLOTHES OUT, WIPES OFF FACE-

okay. okay. I think I'm okay. no not really fisanifmsaoimasidsoiamdsaidas

ANY HOOZLE OMGOSH ARCHIE WEARING THE COCKRING LOL. THEN NOT BEING ABLE TO SHUT IT OFF NO O_____O

THEN THEN THEN HE WAS COMING IN THE MIDDLE OF THE RESTAURANT AND I LAUGHED OUT OF SECOND HAND EMBARRASSMENT.

THEN I SRS'D BECAUSE OMGOSH DNW ARCHIE CRYING IN BATHROOM STALL

BUT THEN UNF MAKE UP BLOWJOB IN SAID BATHROOM STALL.

and yeah. good job. :D

beth_archangel April 1 2010, 00:43:09 UTC

*blushes purple*

I was originally going to have it where Cook purposefully turned it on :3

LOLZ. I blushed while I wrote that part, even though it was my favorite.

DNW ARCHIE CRYING IN BATHROOM STALL EITHER :(

HEE. I was thinking of actual buttsex, but I was like, where are they going to do it?! dnw bb's to have sex on the toilet, lol

TYSM BB! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

like_i_love_you April 1 2010, 00:41:44 UTC

nice!

beth_archangel April 1 2010, 00:43:29 UTC

Thank you! :D

bigwhoop4u April 1 2010, 01:45:38 UTC

I literally had to throw my hand over my gaping mouth and stick my eyes back into their sockets after I finished reading this!! %O
Archie at the table, gosh!!!
Poor bb D :( but Cook to the rescue made it all better :) !!!!
That's what I call dessert!!!

beth_archangel April 1 2010, 02:26:04 UTC

*smishes*
Poor bb indeed, but Cook sure did make him feel better ;)
And I'm sure both boys enjoyed their dessert, I know I did :P