Blood

[bethanyv_10]

The red liquid was flowing down his face, arms, legs, and chest. He could feel it dripping slowly and causing his clothes to stick to him. When things went wrong for him they weren’t just a little wrong, they were horribly, horribly wrong.

He managed to escape, but not before making sure the rest of his team made it out safely. He was the Point Man

Comments

[scarlet_ebony]

This was lovely! Poor Ariadne. I don't think I'd be able to handle all the blood either.
As for the alternate ending, I don't think you should have one. In my opinion, having Arthur decide to quit dreamshare AND have Ariadne get pregnant at the same time is way too coincidental. It's either one or the other. I think this version is sweet enough. (:

[bethanyv_10]

Thanks, that's what I was leaning towards...as much as I love the idea of Arthur and Ariadne as parents, I think I'm pretty satisfied with the ending. Thanks for reading and enjoying!

[frust_sheep]

Great story! :)

And yeah, I know the obsession, too. *lol* ;) The imagination of Arthur being a daddy is too cute. *lol* And to your question: I'm not good in deciding, so I say you are the writer, so you have to decide. :) It does not matter what you decide, it is always great! :)

[bethanyv_10]

Haha...ok at least I'm not the only one...I love the image of Arthur holding a baby...see, I guess it's true. All a guy needs is a puppy or a baby and the girls would swarm him ;) Haha...yeah I am so indecisive too, but I think I'm going to leave it as is...I like the way it ended :) Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!

[unomega]

I saw this on Ff.net, but I always forget to review those. I'm glad you have LJ tho!

This was really sweet, and I love how caring Arthur is, it's very romantic!

[bethanyv_10]

Haha...yeah, I just decided to get an LJ because there's a lot of great fics on here too...thanks for reading and enjoying! I'm glad you liked it!