G/M - One more lie - Chapter 5

[betty_eyes]

Hi everyone! Sorry for the delay but my beta and I have a pair busy weeks and it took us longer than we thought. Thanks phadria for your wonderful comments and improvements. You are the best!
NOTE: Action scenes is not something I feel comfortable writing, so forgive me if NWM is less active and clever than she should be.
As I always said, feedback is

Comments

[maddarilke]

This is so beautiful and heartbreaking, as Marian REALLY learns what Guy has been experiencing for her! Oh, more! MORE! xoxoxoxox

[betty_eyes]

Oh! Thanks! I hope you like the next one but it's gonna be a little while before I post it cause I'm having some problems with LJ.
Thanks so much for your comments.

[maddarilke]

Take your time, I hope your LJ troubles are resolved soon! xo

[fairycutie86]

Whoo! Beautiful chapter. I think I about started crying at the end. Lovely chapter!

[betty_eyes]

I hope it was a good-way crying anyway. Thanks for the kudos! I'm sorry I'm not so fast as you are on the updating thing but life and LJ always get in the way.

[gizxmaz]

Omg, i want more!
That was so wonderful and beautiful. Aaw, so sweet of Guy...
Update soon!

[betty_eyes]

Thank you! I'm doing my best on updating but lot of work right now stops me from writing.k

[phadria]

Yay updates!
It's so sweet that Guy would literally risk his life to get his little box of keepsakes back.
mental, of course, but sweet...
hopefully this will be the gentle shove push marian needs to admit her feelings to guy!
Beta-ing was a pleasure, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

[betty_eyes]

Yes, updates! It's more than that, I told you and I hope you like it. Marian needs to go step by step but be sure she's just going Guy's way. My new one is ready for you but LJ is giving a hard time.
You're a 1st class beta and love your advices.

P.S. You like my icon? LOL!

[aoxelfrieda]

Lovely chapter! I enjoyed Guy's conversation with Allan about what it's like to be in love, and Marian's nightly escapade was very suspenseful. Can't wait to see what happens next!

[betty_eyes]

Thank you! Guy-Allan conversation was the funniest to write and my fav part too. I was a bit worry about NWM action cause I'm not an action writer/person myself but I hope it works out well.
Thanks for the comments!!!