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G/M - One more lie - Chapter Six

Jun 05, 2009 16:55

Hello! A major apology to everyone for this late, late, late update. It took me more than usual to write this one and my beta phadria also take her time for the job. Busy ladies that we both are! But have some improvements I consider so worth waiting for it. As always, please let me know what you think. Comments are happiness to me and who knows you ( Read more... )

fic, onemorelie, guy/marian

Comments 8

gizxmaz June 5 2009, 21:38:47 UTC

YES, YOU'VE UPDATE! I've missed this story.
This chapter was vey good. I really loved Guys letters.. It' was beautiful.
And god, i hate Lord Winchester! Wonder what happens next?? Maybe super-Guy comes to rescue!
Please, update soon! Can't wait!

betty_eyes June 11 2009, 12:28:29 UTC

So get ready! Guess who's coming to the rescue... Next one, all G/M all the time.
Part of wonderfulness of letters is thanks to my beta, Phadria.
Thanks for comments.

aoxelfrieda June 10 2009, 23:02:23 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad I finally got to read this! I like the blossoming flirtation between Sarah & Allan, and Winchester, Jr. is super creepy! Great work!

betty_eyes June 11 2009, 12:31:49 UTC

I cherish Allan, so... sometimes this could become an Allan's fic, but no. For sure it's G/M as next chapter will prove.
Winchester: Like father, like son LOL! But someday he will face the consecuences of this little evil act.
Thanks for your comments and kudos!

fairycutie86 June 14 2009, 21:47:45 UTC

An amazing chapter! I loved all those journal entries from Guy. And the stuff between Allan and Sarah: loved those scenes! I'm imagining myself as Sarah! Haha! Great work and please keep it up!

betty_eyes June 20 2009, 23:40:53 UTC

Please, feel free to picture yourself as Sarah. Imagination is unlimited and you will be very pleased to see where her story is going.
Thanks for the kudos!

gk_rowena19 August 2 2009, 21:55:45 UTC

aww Guy! he should have his own blog!! <3<3<3<3<33<3<3<3<3<3

gggggrrrrr Winchester grrrrrrrrrr

joyfultiger December 8 2009, 19:50:05 UTC

Sarah and Allan are too adorable together. I loved how they told Marian about what happened when they had to hide while searching for the box.

And now the plot thickens.
On to the next part as soon as I can. I'm really enjoying this plot, and you have a great way of adding wit and humor that make me laugh along with the story.

Hugs,
Joyful Tiger