Episode 1.3

Oct 13, 2008 20:52


September 1st, 1985

10.37 am

Lorwood Park, Derbyshire

There was a loud CRACK! which echoed around the vaulted ceiling of the grand entrance hall. Bentley Thorpe didn’t even flinch. He was quite used to it. Lorwood Park, the ancestral home of the Thorpe family, had always echoed a bit, but the effect had been multiplied in recent times, because ( Read more... )

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annemjw October 13 2008, 11:02:42 UTC
YES.

Now to read!

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annemjw October 13 2008, 11:07:56 UTC
What's with the Times New Roman in the second line?

Man, he thinks 20 minutes is early? I would so be there a half hour before the train leaves, none of this Weasley family nonsense about getting on as the train is leaving the station.

"...not to cause their son any reason for concern..." Should that be give, maybe? It reads a little off to me, but I'm weird like that.

Poor lad. Would that he will work out a way to make things explode mysteriously in certain people's faces. Without showing any guilt on his part, of course.

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