Fic: Growing Pains [Doctor Who, PG]

Aug 25, 2008 17:19

Title: Growing Pains
Author: Jay (bewarethespork)
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairings: Seventh Doctor, Ace, hints of Seven/Ace towards the end
Rating: PG for very mild language
Spoilers: Dragonfire, Remembrance of the Daleks, The Greatest Show in the Galaxy, Battlefield, The Curse of Fenric
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pairing: seven/ace, doctor who: seventh doctor, fannish stuff: fic, tv: doctor who

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persiflage_1 August 25 2008, 07:31:00 UTC
I loved this. It's beautifully written, and conveys their developing friendship beautifully.

I love the fact that he eventually gives up correcting her when she calls him "Professor"...

And it's interesting that he doesn't notice her growing up until she's all grown up.

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bewarethespork August 26 2008, 00:10:09 UTC
Thank you!

I got the sense with Seven that he had been so focused on making Ace what he wanted her to be that he didn't realise that she was growing outside of that too, hence the line(s) about changes that he didn't see coming.

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persiflage_1 August 26 2008, 05:03:04 UTC
Yes, I think you're probably right! He couldn't see the wood for the trees.

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bewarethespork August 26 2008, 05:07:08 UTC
That's exactly it.

Randomly, I'm so excited for Martha meeting Seven in A Shift in Perspective! When's that going to happen?

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madmogs August 25 2008, 09:43:18 UTC
Wow, this is brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Love 7 and his cluelessness so much.

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bewarethespork August 26 2008, 00:13:57 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I have to say, writing clueless!Seven was fun. So much for him being the Great Manipulator, right?

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padawanpooh August 25 2008, 15:26:54 UTC
Absolutely wonderful! You've captured the Seven/Ace dynamic beautifully, and all of the complexities that come with it. A gorgeous story I'm saving to treasure.

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bewarethespork August 26 2008, 00:16:30 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^.^

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ravenskyewalker August 25 2008, 15:38:45 UTC
Oh, that's just gorgeous. I wish I could be more precise, but it all works -- their voices, their confusion and sudden understanding, even the TARDIS dropping hints for the Doctor. You must write them more, please.

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bewarethespork August 26 2008, 00:19:36 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I do want to write more of them - I've started a set of drabbles about them and I've got an idea for another fic (a scene that didn't quite fit into this one) - so hopefully you'll see more Seven/Ace from me in the not-too-distant future.

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xanister August 25 2008, 17:55:31 UTC
Oh this was brill. :)

You captured the Seven/Ace dynamic perfectly! I've been on a Seven kick lately watching all the stories and this was refreshing.

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bewarethespork August 26 2008, 00:19:38 UTC
Thanks!

I've been working my way through Seven's serials as well. He was my favourite Doctor after just one serial (The Curse of Fenric), and every new one I see just makes me love him more.

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xanister August 26 2008, 00:26:31 UTC
I don't know if you get BBCKids but right now they're running Seven serials for about the next two months, one story every Sunday night.

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bewarethespork August 26 2008, 00:28:10 UTC
I'm in Australia, and the only international TV I get is via satellite. I've been downloading episodes. But now I wish I were in the UK! (Even more than usual, I mean.)

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