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bexatious

tacos and stars

Feb 01, 2009 19:05

Title: Tacos And Stars
Rating: YTeen
A/N: First thing I've properly written in months. Fluff. Christine made it better.

( I need your help with something )

creative:fiction

Comments 14

crushing83 February 2 2009, 01:37:22 UTC

I felt like I was watching them on tv or something :)

Nice work. Good for Bob Josh. And I loved the writing on his hand with the Sharpie.

Yay for fic :D

bexatious February 4 2009, 01:53:18 UTC

I really wish I could still see them on tv. I never got enough of the good stuff! Stupid end of series stupidity.

kiss_me_cassie February 2 2009, 01:38:24 UTC

Oh, yes, the garden bit still has me swooning.

bexatious February 4 2009, 01:53:59 UTC

Thank you so much for your help. Hopefully I can move on to the next idea and have it be a bit easier now the voices are returning.

lzbrt February 2 2009, 01:48:11 UTC

I ♥ this SO MUCH. It was sweet and funny with the perfect little snarks and so very them and I am all awww-y and melty. It also makes me realize that it has been AGES since I've read a J/D fic and I miss them a lot. And now I am going to make a list of all the things I loved about it and annoy you with it so you have to believe me.

bexatious February 4 2009, 01:54:38 UTC

I want to see that list because I still have serious doubts over 95% of this fic. It could be soooo much better, but I fail. Fail Bex is Fail.

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bexatious February 4 2009, 01:55:54 UTC

Donna was a pretty smart chicky from the start so it's no wonder he finally went for her!

Glad you liked it. I love the idea of a simple proposal as well. They're not really the flashy kind of couple.

kmbh February 2 2009, 07:38:33 UTC

That was lovely. The blend of romance and domesticity was wonderful. The whole converstaion on the deck had me swooning!

bexatious February 4 2009, 01:52:35 UTC

I swoon whenever I think about them in my mind. They're still crazy in love in my universe.