Title: Tomorrow, I'll Miss You Rating: Child A/N: My first Sherlock fic, starring Molly and Sherlock with a guest appearance by Graham Gavin Geoff Greg Lestrade. With love to Court for the beta.
I love the way you have captured the way these two bicker here. The way Sherlock will say something and then halfheartedly try to back away from it like he didn't really mean it. The way he annoyingly sees the little things you don't want him to see. And I like the extra tension you have between them because things aren't back to the way they were before he died. This is really good, especially for a first step into writing these characters.
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You're good for my ego.
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