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Bait Bus - First Seduction

Oct 31, 2010 21:10

Title: Bait Bus - First Seduction
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Twoshot

Summary: Where unsuspecting men are lured into a van by a beautiful girl, only to be offered an interesting opportunity with an even more beautiful boy…

Disclaimery A/N: This is based off the porn site "Bait Bus". I admit, I stole their idea and used it for my own ( Read more... )

type: au, starring: dbsk, title: bait bus, rating: nc-17, status: complete, pairing: yunjae, genre: smut, length: twoshot, *fic

Comments 161

bird0fparadise October 31 2010, 15:13:49 UTC

bexy31 October 31 2010, 15:25:59 UTC

I know, it's harsh, right? O.o But their reactions look so real... So what I'm thinking is, after they've kicked them out and the guy's gone running after the van, they stop, give him the money and have him sign a disclaimer or something. Otherwise it totally seems illegal O.O

I'm glad you liked the fic though!! ^w^ Thank you muchly for commenting!! :D

bird0fparadise October 31 2010, 15:38:22 UTC

bexy31 October 31 2010, 15:46:16 UTC

Ha ha ha XD
Yup, they're idiots~ Which is why it's amusing even though it's mean - it's sorta their own fault...
In the old videos they used to show them leaving the guys, but I went back to look before I wrote this and that's not in the previews anymore, so I don't know if it still happens O.o
Their reactions really do look pretty real though... Makes one curious, huh? XD

yozora_yume October 31 2010, 15:21:06 UTC

this is so hot and all and wow you're writing so many fics in one day.8D

bexy31 October 31 2010, 15:28:57 UTC

Ahh, thank you ^_^ I'm glad you liked it :)

I actually only wrote this one today, even though I'd planned to do the Yoosu one too. I'm so slow -.-
Yoosu shall probably be written during my lessons tomorrow in a valiant effort to stay awake XD Which is what I did last week and it seemed to work quite well...

Thanks for commenting! ^_^

bizarrels2vetri October 31 2010, 15:24:13 UTC

quite long.... LMOA~~~~~~~~
weird comment from me but yeah...
smutty scene all the way~~~

bexy31 October 31 2010, 15:30:34 UTC

Ahh, any comment makes me happy~ :D So thank you for leaving one! ^_^

Yay smut! XD

Also, your icon is so cute!! *squishes*

xxfergiexx October 31 2010, 15:37:20 UTC

Damn, that was hot! Loved it!

bexy31 October 31 2010, 15:40:48 UTC

Thank you! ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it! :D Thanks for commenting~ :3

Also, I love your icon XDDD

r_1353 October 31 2010, 16:02:54 UTC

this is.. wow..
the smut is HOT & the last part was.. SWEET!!!

EPIC WIN!!

bexy31 October 31 2010, 16:06:33 UTC

He he, thank you!! ^///^ I'm glad you liked it :) Yay sweetness! ^_^

Thanks for commenting :D