fic: edges of intimacy

[theviolonist]

Author: theviolonist
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Wordcount: c. 5K
Summary: It starts with the vegetable shortage.
Spoilers for all of season 1 and 2, just to be sure. AU after Bastille Day.
Rating: R for language and sex
Notes: And - much thanks to my beta, callmeonetrack, without whom this fic probably wouldn't be half of what it is. Thanks for being ruthless, love!

Comments

[cosetteferaud]

This was truly fantastic. You captured everything that made me fall in love with Kara and Lee (and BSG) in those first two seasons. And I love how you portrayed the progression of their relationship; it's lovely and rings true to them. Thanks for sharing!

[theviolonist]

Thank you so much, dear! Half (three quarters) of the credit for their relationship goes to callmeonetrack, though - she's the one who steered me in the right direction there : )

[bluuefiire]

So much to just love about this fic!

Love your 'voice'. The whole thing felt very pilots. If only this is how it really went! I enjoyed the dual/alternating perspectives and the development of the relationship angst and all. Look forward to reading more :)

[justascrewup2]

Mmm...pilots :) Love all of the callback lines and situations and what you've done with the story. Good read. Thanks for sharing!

[catteo]

Really enjoyed this - fabulous early pilots vibe. I thought that their voices were really realistic and I love the fact that you've left the ending open for us to decide what happens. Lovely!

[terresdebrume]

Oooh boy I really, really liked this fic *_*

I like that you can feel the tension between Kara and Lee sizzling through the story even after they sorta-maybe-kinda get together and how close to canon you made them, that was really well done :D