LJ Idol: Week 11 - "Haute"

[beyond_my_smile]

“No, no, no! This is ALL wrong!” Daysha snapped her fingers at the wedding planner, Ernesto. “Ernie, darling, I said ‘haute couture.’ Are you daft? What are these bargain bin table cloths doing here?” Ernesto began clapping his hands furiously at his staff, instructing them in some other language to destroy the offensive table cloths. Mackenzie

Comments

[basric]

Excellent entry. I enjoyed reading this very much.

[beyond_my_smile]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[greathall]

I expected a twist at the end, but this was a very unexpected twist. Nice job.

[beyond_my_smile]

LOL glad I didn't disappoint.

[myrna_bird]

Whoa! What a story.

[beyond_my_smile]

Thanks?

[myrna_bird]

Oh yes, a vote. I am sorry my comment left you with the question. It was just such a surprise to me that I had no other words at the moment.

[beyond_my_smile]

Oh no, I was asking for a vote, I was just confused about whether or not you liked the post. I can understand being surprised speechless. Thank you for the support, btw. :)

[ecosopher]

What a fall from grace!

I really loved the sentences:

Mackenzie’s twins climbed into her lap for the show. Tyler scooted close to place his arm around the back of her chair.

It's just a little snapshot of a family, where everyone is comfortable and complete.

[beyond_my_smile]

Just a reflection on how the people who seem to be the most concerned about image and status are usually the ones who have something to hide.

Exactly the picture I was trying to paint, thanks.

[beyond_my_smile]

Thank you. I always welcome helpful feedback. Will try to make it easier to read!