#18 Theme 49: Time Goes By - Every Little Thing; Tora/Hiroto

Oct 18, 2009 21:28

Title: Separation Anxiety
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 049 Time Goes By (Every Little Thing)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU, angst, smut?
Comments: Nell's "Separation Anxiety" added a good kick of inspiration here.

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 01:59:44 UTC
We are terrible terrible addicts yes? <333

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sono_kiseki October 19 2009, 02:03:39 UTC
asdkhssa /flails/ this is so so so so so so so so so so so so pretty. ♥ I really like your way with words, the way you describe Pon as a dreamer chasing after huge dreams, the way Tora is passive-angry throughout the final week but wasn't selfish enough to stay angry in front of Pon's confusion, the way the bands weren't up to Hiroto's expectation and the way how weekdays are a dream and weekends are a reality. I love it all,

Good job, Lan-tan-senpai! ♥

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 02:23:30 UTC
WUT?! LOL the minute I finally post things I wipe what I've written from my mind. ROFL. Weekday dreams and weekend realities sounds so cool D:! I wished I thought of it! Anyways! Thanks for reading and commenting lol I have no idea what I do online anymore but write write we must write!...?!? ♥

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sono_kiseki October 19 2009, 08:16:21 UTC
XDD I shall totally snatch that for a future storyline then. ♥ no problem, I always read your fics. 8) Because I plainly have no life away from the computer, except with my beautiful baby ♥

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 22:51:39 UTC
pfffft. I clearly spend lots of time writing XD
Go write some Torapon? prz >.< LOL ♥

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kestral_kitsune October 19 2009, 02:12:30 UTC
sakdfsldf;dsf;ff

awwwwwww so biter sweet <3

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 02:25:57 UTC
aghfghfljfhgak thank you for reading and commenting!!! lol <3333 *dslkghdsghfa's with everyone else*

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kestral_kitsune October 19 2009, 02:27:41 UTC
hehe
keysmashing is awesome and worth while while wearing wrist braces <3

more torapon plz!

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 02:35:27 UTC
LOL *LOUD SOUNDS*
MORE TORAPON YES YES PRZ

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superhappynao October 19 2009, 02:25:06 UTC
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Ok so it's like... 22 minutes past 3 in the morning, I have a lecture tomorrow, and I'm lacking sleep from the night before...

This was OBVIOUSLY the best time to start reading some torapon XDDD
I've really wanted to start reading your stuff again because I really enjoy it, and when I saw this update I knew I had to read it. It's actually AMAZING I enjoyed every little smidgen of it!
Everything was portrayed so well, expecially how you've represented the time in it. Everything's so smooth and well written.... EEE I'M GONNA HAVE TO READ IT AGAIN TOMORROW XDD

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 02:31:46 UTC
LMAO INSANE O'CLOCK IS THE BEST O'CLOCK TO BE READING TORAPON. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL<33333333333333

I love you and your comments XD don't worry about the rest of the other fics cuz....... lol they're sketchy. TAT I try but ??? ahahahaha YOU GO TO SLEEP D:!!!! And have sweet dreams ♥

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148km October 19 2009, 02:31:32 UTC
durrrrr, I haven't read any fic in a long time, so I confess, I read this one because Nellllll XD I definitely had that song in my head while I was reading, it was so appropriate. :o! Good job, good job. *_*

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 02:34:22 UTC
wahahah sdlghlksahgflka Nell<33333333333333
Thank you for trying it out! XD Now that you've mentioned it, I.... should probably write more captivating comment.summaries huh? LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I'm glad you liked it though ^.^

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