#21 Theme 11: Dear My Friend - Miyavi; Tora/Hiroto

[beyondtheremix]

Title: Dead End Friends
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 011 Dear My Friend (Miyavi)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: brief mentions of sex
Comments: A short something hugely inspired by this song.

Comments

[k_laker]

Pon deserves more than whatt he's getting. :/

Only a sick, twisted fool would deny him. ;-;
Or someone as oblivious as Tora.

MAYBE THEY FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT THE SITUATION.
-revelation-

[beyondtheremix]

LOL MAYBE THEY DO??!
And they're both too stupid to realize. I mean oblivious* XDDD; Pon's not crying so who knows~~ Tora is being a mystery so it's two times the who knows~~~~~

Thanks for reading!

[bauci]

You're really good at these in-between moods, like neither the characters nor the readers can pinpoint the truth, there's this weird sort of barely there equilibrium. I love it.
And gorgeous banner.

[beyondtheremix]

Why thank you♥
Sometimes it seems like my characters don't want to reveal anything and then I can only hope the reader understands what's going on.

I love how the picture looks like a snapshot against a building. Like they got caught in the mountains lol.

[bauci]

♥

Yeahhhh, can you tell me where it's from?

[beyondtheremix]

http://alice9gotgame.livejournal.com/126401.html

join or watch~ she scans loads and lots and doesn't really post anywhere else :)

[invisiblehabits]

Seriously, this story is just....just....gah, I don't even know what to call it! Bittersweet, perhaps? They are so sweet together, hanging out and sending little messages only the other interprets, so perfect for each other, yet totally out of reach even when they want nothing more...

The end, with Pon sleeping on the floor, makes me want to cry and cuddle him all at once. Because it's not fair he cannot have Tora there to hold him. And somehow I really like the notion no one knows, that Saga hasn't got a clue what they're up to when everyone else leaves. Don't know if that was how you meant it to be, but it's how I interpret it and I love the cracked perfection it forms.

Will stop rambling now!

[beyondtheremix]

Ohhhhhh!

I really enjoyed writing this one, how everything fit and the sorts of images I was seeing as I wrote. They colored in aching shades of longing and bathed in blinding headlights. Ho hum. I wonder if I can even write like this anymore LOL.

[bellcheria]

][pclokjfwhvdbsjhiudgfekhbjwqkudfevhqw LAAAAN. Why do you write so beautifully ;A; It doesn't even ache in my heart cause Hiroto is right, they have at least something. I love the remote places they go and how they said no to Saga XDD <33 (Saga knows all, I'm sure).

<333 I liked it a lot dear, I love it how you changed the places and still had this not-so-rushed pace to it <3

[beyondtheremix]

Wahhhhh I don't even remember writing this |D

But thanks for reading! I believe I just had this one image and lines from the song I wanted to write in and then this happened. I should go and edit/rewrite things I ALWAYS SAY I WILL, but tiiiime lol.