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beyondtheremix

#27 Theme 02: Alibi - SID; Tora/Hiroto

Jan 11, 2010 20:47

Title: Bandoliers
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 002 Alibi (SID)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Bands[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU, some angst, drama, violence and romance?
Comments: Bandoliers, to fight me dear. Inspired by this song and its lyrics.

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

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beyondtheremix January 12 2010, 02:10:11 UTC

LOOOOOOOOOL WRYYYYY ;_;

Well~ I tried to be clearer. Hopefully it's clearer O_O; HRMMM YOU SHOULD WRITE/POST. Or actually you should hurry up and past you test so you can write/post TAT

♥

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beyondtheremix January 12 2010, 13:27:30 UTC

*sniffsniff*

I suppose Hiroto really gave up on having a real life. All he had left was running, running and hiding so that first punch, that first fight, first theft, first crime, he felt like he was taking control of his life.

He would die when he wanted and no other way :( I think there was a lot of things I didn't write into this. Like how Tora or Hiroto felt, but whatever 8D I leave it to everyone else to come up.

sono_kiseki January 12 2010, 02:08:12 UTC

The ending killed me. ;A;

sono_kiseki January 12 2010, 02:08:47 UTC

And I always get beaten by you on Suzy-senpai's fics, and she always beat me on your fics. e___e

beyondtheremix January 12 2010, 02:11:16 UTC

LOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOL

It's cuz we're aliens and have supapowahs like that (<>.<>)v

hehehehe thanks for reading!!♥

sono_kiseki January 12 2010, 02:15:45 UTC

well dammit imma rear some superpowers of my own. Which may or may not involve gheilazors.

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12thgrave January 12 2010, 03:38:46 UTC

I had to re-read the ending for a minute, just because my brain is starting to process slower (time to go to bed XD)
but I got it the second time! and aww...
my heart goes out to Tora...
You would wish things to smooth over, but reality is never that simple.

beyondtheremix January 12 2010, 03:42:18 UTC

Yeahhhhh XD that last bit was tricky b/c my brain started to fail too! O_o Hah~ I don't know who to feel more sorry for, Tora because o fhis job, his life, what happened, or Hiroto because all the things he's had to go through because of Tora. I think Pon's spirit sort of broke from all the attacks ;_;

Anywho~ thanks for reading! WOO! second fic in 2 days~ XD♥

luminous_vibe January 12 2010, 06:16:44 UTC

Oh... he died. T_T How depressing... and yet how poetic. I have an odd fascination with the lover killing the one he loves so don't mind me if I enjoyed this way more than I should have.

It was amazing though, really. Well done, well written, I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

beyondtheremix January 12 2010, 13:29:44 UTC

I've been killing them lately alkdglkfsjgsa WHY MUSES WHY?!?! Well in my mind the deaths aren't so painful at least. He wanted it XD;

Thanks for reading! LOL and it's okay to have fascinations. Lovers can't always be fluffy... it'd get boring after a while |D

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beyondtheremix January 12 2010, 13:35:47 UTC

Ahhh I don't think I've quite listen to that song enough to know how it goes/how the lyrics go, but just the word Alibi... I somehow saw Pon asking Tora to cover him, make up lies and stories for his crimes so he wouldn't get caught... and then it turned into this.

Loved ones don't let loved ones get away with murder, not if you know what's good for them, not in most cases :[ I think Pon knew that, knew there was a limit, but he just wanted out.

Whew~ Thanks for reading!