#40 Theme 32: Never Again - KAT TUN; Tora/Hiroto

May 26, 2010 21:56

Title: Overload
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 032 Never Again (KAT-TUN)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU
Comments: The sequel to Wanderlust which has taken me forever and a day to post and is probably lame, but heck I wrote it anyway. This is inspired by The Cardigan's Overload so take a listen. Poopie ._.

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

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beyondtheremix May 27 2010, 14:45:01 UTC
D:

You figured out the haunting bit three months ago though! LOL But seriously... my brain has been so reluctant to write lately I'm surprise this got written all the way through. It was good in my head at least!

I hope your didn't have nightmares because I sure had strange dreams.......

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luminous_vibe May 27 2010, 05:35:31 UTC
O.O

Still scary. >_< I had to read a few times to figure out what was going on (mostly because I forgot what the first one was about so I had to go back) but I get it and now it's even more scary. It's not fail though even if it gives me nightmares tonight (which it might).

<3

P.S. Sorry for re-commenting, LJ failed and cut off half of it the first time. >_>

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beyondtheremix May 27 2010, 14:47:55 UTC
Ahh it's no problem! LOL The more comments the better, but yeah, I fell asleep as soon as I posted XDDD

Yeahhhhh the first one was better LOL Because it got written before my muses died... Am I'm glad you thought it was scary! LOL Sorry! I didn't know if anyone would find it creepy because it was in my head but I couldn't get it out right XD;

Thanks for reading! I how it makes sense now? *sweats*

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beyondtheremix May 27 2010, 14:54:14 UTC
LOL angry? I guess they had no choice but to ignore it and carry on because that's all they could do. And then after that there was no way they could ignore it, but they still had to carry on otherwise they'd just give up on living.

Hmmmmmm. It was like a ghost that constantly forced them away from the rest of the world, farther and farther. And yet they aren't meant to be there at the same time too! Everything thing you said XD They're being haunted. They're not allowed to have a home anymore because they destroyed someone else's home and consequently they've lost touch with everyone, everything O_O

Yeah idk. The story wanted to be deep but I wasn't willing to write it, lazy half asser that I am *sweats*

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sono_kiseki May 27 2010, 14:56:01 UTC
oh god, perfection written.

It's night and I'm tired. Nightmares!!!! D: /flails/

It's pretty. I don't really get it because my brain is made of cotton at the moment, but it's really pretty.

And really creepy. ):

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beyondtheremix May 27 2010, 15:49:33 UTC
D: Nightmares?? It's not that bad *sweats* It's not that good either TAT! I had to force this out my ass so don't say perfection TAT *dies of embarrassment*

I hope you'll get it after sleep!!! XD

thanks for reading!

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bellcheria May 27 2010, 15:13:16 UTC
OMGOMGOMG WHAT THE FUCK WHAT HELLL OMG OMG OMG

HERE I SIT
BEING ALL YAY AND OMFG SHE'S GOING ON WITH THIS STORY
AND I DON'T UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING OF IT. Just a bit...
*rereading again and again*

BUT I OMFG CREEEEEEEEEEEPPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

But really ;A; I still don't understand the dancing part...If it was just a memory from before or what it had to do with the spirit... Its all really crazy and confusing *O* But still fucking good ><

I mean, they pretend to be moving and being happy, then things go and be crazy, THEN a storm comes and they need to run, before the building they once lived in is in flames...

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beyondtheremix May 27 2010, 15:47:14 UTC
LOL

NOTHING YOU KNOW COULD BE REAL!!! LOLOLOLOL Sorry XD I actually wrote it so you couldn't tell what's happening/what's real. The last story might not have happened and may have simply been a dream of a memory. The storm might not be real. The empty apartment after the storm and the cemetery might not be real.

The only thing that IS real is that they're being haunted and have to run D: LOL Hopefully this helps you understand it after a reread O_O?? Or! Or read my reply to koboshi_ichigo's comment hahah XD She basically summed it up!

Thanks for reading! LOL and waiting? *sweats* SORRY LOL

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bellcheria June 20 2010, 14:45:02 UTC
LOL THATS THE WAY YOU WROTE THIS STORY?? To makes us little minds go batshit!!! XD

YES
BE SORRY
BUT FEAR NOT XD
And have a good vacation...thing? XD

AND WHAT LATE REPLY? LATE IS WHAT THE VIEWER THINKS OF LATE AND I'M TOTALLY IN TIME IN REPLYING *LOL*

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beyondtheremix June 21 2010, 01:10:32 UTC
LOL<3

It's all good!!!
And thanks!

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