Title: Heat III
Author:
beyondtheremixRating: NC-17
Pairing:
Ronon/Hiroto,
Ronon/Tora, Tora/Hiroto (Stargate Atlantis/Alice Nine)
Disclaimer: AU, slavery, non-con, crack pairing!
Comments: Written as a sort of sequel for
tingedwords to connect her Ronon/Tora to Heat..... *sweats* IDK lol. If you feel like reading them/this... the first three parts are all, of course, in
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Poor poor angry Ronon. I think he takes on a whole new personality or just lets the sheer instinctual side of him out in situations like this. He stops thinking and just goes with it :[
ANYWAY. THIS IS ALL ENTIRELY YOUR FAULT. And the next part if maybe a fourth done SO YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT LOL.
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LOL I like your "reasonably happier ending" because that sounds about right! Seriously though, this is like the most random crack pairings ever, but my brain doesn't even register the strangeness anymore D:
WHAT HAS tingedwords DONE TO ME?!!
Thank you very much for reading this craziness though!!!!
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GUESS WHAT?!
When you Google "Heat III" the third to last search result on the first page starts with "Chained" LMFAO
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(I do that too sometimes LMAO I AM HIROTO BIASED TOO HAHAHAHAHAHA OMG)
ALSO, this is in need of some serious revising! So lucky for you you're not reading it in it's drafty form now. And omg it IS long D:
Hiroto and Ronon are the focus of the first two parts, then Tora and Ronon the interlude, and this is also kind of mostly Tora and Ronon with an unfortunate guest appearance by Hiroto. Ronon is kind of the pivotal character in this story because he has the responsibility of setting things into motion (apparently D:) so the story might be very Ronon-centered, but I try to balance out the perspectives, I really do!
LOL *rants* AND AND and it's okay if you don't read it all the way because this was more for mine and tingedwords' amusement *snort*
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Well, it is academic work so pffft! My professors usually want the fluff even though I'd write my papers in bullet points if I could. I don't understand convoluting facts just to restate what's already been proven in a different, "prettier" way. Went off on a tangent there... but shaking my head right now lol.
GRUHAFLKGHHD Stupid lj server not letting me do anything D< And I agree! He is such a cutie 8[ I'm trying to pick up writing again with this story and finish my 50stories challenge. It might just be working!
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As I'm currently watching Rome series I'm fully tuned for Rome and all that plus Tora and Ronon and Pon, together.
And I totally fell for Tora. He is such clever and cunning man here. Also looking forward for that happier-than-ever-before ending that will come. Totally wishing Tora would take Ronon and Pon with him to his homeland ¦ :D
And it's good to see you back ^^
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UGH I've been trying to edit this post since I posted it but LiveJournal's been having server problems and I can't :\ But I'm glad it sounds like you liked it! Hehehehe. Hopefully Heat IV will be the end of this because this was LONG LOL.
Thank you very much for reading! I look forward to getting the next part done and posted too D:
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I keep trying to edit this... but CAN'T AJFLKGJLAGJALKGFJAFG. That may be part of the reason why you couldn't see it?
And URGH I STILL can't edit it T_________________T
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