Title: Thoughts
Author: beyondthescenes
Word Count: 162
Rating: PG
Challenge: #76, not that boy
Characters: Botan, Kurama
Disclaimer: No profit is being made from this, and the characters aren't mine.
Author's Notes: Trying to experiment with a different style. ^_^
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But she could never stay away. )
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Almost every sentence here is absolutely great, and if I start quoting, I'll probably quote the whole thing, so I won't. :p I love the way you described Kurama. *fangirls* :D :D :D And the last two lines just sealed off the whole deal. It's so perfect. *_*
...THIS IS SO GREAT. I AM MEMORIFYING IT LIKE, RIGHT NOW. YOU HAVE MADE ME ALL CAPSLOCKY WITH GLEE. OMG SO AWESOME.
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Yay! Someone actually likes it! Am now quite happy. I was experimenting with the writing style, and I was worried it might come off as weird or disjointed. :)
I'm honored (and terribly flattered) that you're memorying this. Thank you so much! You made my day. :)
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