Fic: Excerpt (Continued)

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Veronica took a dainty bite from her ice cream as she watched Logan from the corner of her eye.

“So what did Dick want to talk about?”

“Oh you know, this and that, Pamela Anderson’s boobs, the next issue of playboy. Deep issues for Dick.” He replied as he stared at his feet. His demeanour contradicted with his humour laced tone.

Veronica shook her

Comments

[love_is_epic]

I LoVed it! I love the snippets from their relationships over the years, both with each other and different people. And the fact that Logan wrote something for his little girl is just awesome. I can just see Logan being a doting father. I love the scene at the end, too. I just know that after a few years of maturing that LoVe could have a stable relationship. I mean, how many of us were able to have healthy relationships at 18? Add their history and that's only more cause to think that further down the road they will be able to make it.

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I just know that after a few years of maturing that LoVe could have a stable relationship.
Well, I certainly hope so :)

Thank you for your feedback!

[havemy_heart]

I love this! I liked how you gave us little fragments of them through their different relationships. Very bittersweet. And the ending got me all choked up ;)

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I'm glad you liked it. From the warning on my vm_santa gift, I get that you don't enjoy the angst. So I'm glad you enjoyed the bittersweet with the fluffy ending :)

Thank you for your feedback!

[jesterlady]

Very nice. It got the nuances of all the relationships down right. And of course, came back to the inevitable and fit in with the general love theme.

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Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[angst_driven]

Very nice! (Even w/o angst!) ; )

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Thanks! :)

[hokeysmoke]

First? I absolutely LOVE the title you've come up with for Logan's book. Very in-character and funny, to boot.

You've got a few minor typos, mostly missing commas. No biggie, but the story? Very good flow and fun to read, too.

[bfragrant]

Those typos? Those are holiday decorations looks around innocently* :D Thanks for the concrit, I appreciate it.

the story? Very good flow and fun to read, too.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.