Relations between Senseis: Chapter 4

[bgreenwivy]

Title: Relations between Senseis
Pairing: (KakaIru, GaiIru, KakaGai with eventual GaiKakaIru )
Rating: NC17 for Sex, Violence and Mature themes
Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Violence, Polyamorous Relationship
Summary: There is a lot more to Maito Gai then meets the eye and unfortunately it takes some bad things happening before Kakashi and Iruka

Comments

[dragon695]

I have to admit, this is my first real kakairu story. I was drawn to it because I had a strange craving for Gai deconstructed. I think you have done a fine job so far, leaving little to complain about. The only thing that I think might add something to it might be a little impromptu drop-in by Naruto. I know he's kinda dense, but he has that ability to bring out the best in people. Goodness knows, he a virtual expert at unrequited love *cough*Sauske*cough*.

[bgreenwivy]

Lol eventually I will work my way through all of the people Gai thinks of as friends, I think. I appreciate the review. Gai is one of those characters for me where I know he isn't upbeat and happy all the time. I felt this intense need to pick him apart and this seemed the vehicle to do it from. Thank you for giving this a chance.

[cynaga]

Outstanding! I am really enjoying this deep look into Gai and the potential threesome....