If You're For Real and Not Pretend (3/3)

[bhstranger]

Comments

[poor_medea]

Oh my god, this was so great. So sweet without being saccharine, and I love your style and tone of writing. It's kind of dreamy and fits the story so well, the way the characters are adrift. Thanks for sharing!

[bhstranger]

Ah! Oh god, you're amazing. And I'm in love with The Next Big Thing, so the fact that you're even commenting on this - ah! Can't wait to read the next update :)

[say_thanks]

wow. helloooo new favourite fic!

this was just - brilliant. spectacular. quite beautiful. i loved it. i was mesmerised by it - i couldn't stop reading.

your writing, for starters, flows together so well, fits together so perfectly. not gonna lie, i teared up when louis appeared on that stage. wonderful characterisations. i really, really enjoyed this.

[cool_kilua]

So cuuute!

So when he comes up from behind and wraps an arm around Louis’ chest, he whispers into his ear, “You were adrift…”

Louis snorts but leans into the embrace so that his back lines up evenly with Harry’s chest.

“Yeah, yeah,” he huffs in return. “And you brought me back, I know. I get it.”

Best ending ever <3

[samanthajane1]

I've read this a few times already on tumblr but I just thought I'd comment here and say that I love it. (and I kinda love everything else you write on tumblr btw xD)

I love the atmosphere you give their relationship, it's so chest-achy and beautiful. And I really love your Harry, he's just the sweetest thing. This is really just such a lovely idea for a story, really simple yet so captivating, the way they are together and all the fluttery unsaid feelings just hooked me in. Thank you for writing this! :)

[paloymay]

DANII!!! Ive already told you this through tumblr but ugh you're writing is just phenomenal. This is the third time reading this oneshot because it's honestly amazing. Ugh, im so glad to have you on livejournal now so more people can see the brilliance that is your writing.. Much love xx