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Chocolate - Part Four

Jul 18, 2007 23:21

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple. Inseperable ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

Comments 26

kagalisenzumen July 19 2007, 19:45:13 UTC

yeah, the word "fuck" does appear often in this part... lol.
OMG! MASSU, NOOOOO! You should have said it to Shige! I'm sure he would have understood (but now after that I'm not so sure anymore...)
great chapter!

biancamasuda July 19 2007, 22:49:30 UTC

Yes! It was a very swear-ful frenzy. HAHA. I'm just showing the scary-ness of the idea of cheating. It probably kind of does happen that way.

NOT THAT I KNOW. I'M GUESSING, OK? Hahaha.

Masuda is so evil. Jin is even WORSE. NOOO.

Thanks!!!! Thanks for reading <3!

yuuhi_suushi July 19 2007, 21:02:03 UTC

Alright... First off: Yay, you updated! Wooooooo~ *runs around like a maniac* I was starting to think you were dead or something... *shifty eyes*

Secondly, poor, poor Shige doesn't have a clue what's wrong with his Massu. *pat pat*

And last: MASSU, JIN, YOU SICK BAKAS. *WHACK, WHACK*

I love this story. A lot. But I'm starting to hate Massu. T____T

"Fuck" was used too much. XDD But I don't really care. YOU UPDATED. Woo~

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter! And sorry for the long comment. :3

biancamasuda July 19 2007, 22:52:18 UTC

I just have been so busy...I've wanted to write so much too! Holy crap!

And I know. Shige is the total victim here. STUPID MASUDA. WHY CAN'T YOU RESIST?

Yeah, Masuda is even making ME infuriated. I WROTE this. I'm nuts.

Yeah "fuck" was really overused. But like...it's to show the attitude of everyone. It displays anger...and obviously hornyness when it comes to Jin and Masuda. HAHAHA.

And no problem about the long comment. I LOVE LONG COMMENTS. FRANKLY...IT WASN'T LONG ENOUGH.

yuuhi_suushi July 20 2007, 16:08:13 UTC

THEN I SHALL MAKE A EVEN LONGER COMMENT NEXT TIME??? XDDD

oofle July 20 2007, 16:15:09 UTC

So I finally get to read this...and my response is...

WHAT THE FREAKING HECK BIANCA?!?!?!

What are you trying to do to Shige?!?! to Masuda?!?! GEEZ!

I loved it...and Kusano popped up! YAY!

biancamasuda July 20 2007, 18:47:25 UTC

I knew you'd love Kusano's little cameo. HAHAHA.

I-I'M SORRY. I MADE MASUDA SO STUPID. I made him a lot dumber than I wanted to. But it makes it more dramatic. HAHAHA.

And now I can make the fic longer than a WEEK. It couldn't have ended as such, anyway.

I FEEL SO BAD FOR SHIGE THOUGH. Maybe I'll make something amaazing happen to him, like he wins the lottery, leaves Masuda, and then Masuda realizes he's a jerk and they're happy and rich?

HAHAHA. I don't think so >=(.

ercinea July 21 2007, 07:08:20 UTC

You know I didn't think the swearing was that bad. But, then I swear like a sailor. Really, though, I think it fits with the tense emotions of the whole chapter.
The last line was an awesome way to end this chapter too.
I kind of like seeing Massu et al this way. It's refreshing. The story is just compelling. I wander what will happen when Jin finds Massu's wife is a he.
Thank you so much for continuing this!

biancamasuda July 21 2007, 23:31:32 UTC

I swear quite profusely as well. So it was very easy for me, HAHAHA.

But I thought it fit well with the emotions too. Whether it was anger, or just how Jin and Masuda...expressed themselves. HAHAHA.

The last line makes me laugh. I love that swear <.<

It's so odd seeing Masuda this way, isn't it? That's why it's surprisingly fun to write. And, being my favorite, you'd think I'd write him more on the side where people liked him.

He WAS likeable at first, I guess. Anyway. Enough babbling.

Thank YOU for reading!!!

shigekamenashi August 9 2007, 05:52:43 UTC

OMG!!!! MASUDA TAKAHISA BAKA!!!!
thats a not-to-do thing!!!
you dont go and mess with Jin and dont say horrible things to shigeaki!! argh >__<*** now im mad i hate them both! poor shige "the victim" ;___; ill call him like that from now
masuda takahisa "The baka"
Akanishi Jin "The pervert o.ó sex addict"
i love-hate-love (notice the hate part xD) this one ;__; i hate massu for doing that to shige... how could he?!

biancamasuda August 9 2007, 20:26:09 UTC

I KNOW.

I'm so evil. And I made Masuda evil. HOW COULD I DO SUCH A RIDICULOUS THING??????????????????????

Thanks for reading =)!