Chocolate - Part Five

Jul 26, 2007 20:45

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple. Inseperable ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

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shiny_satsuma July 27 2007, 03:52:47 UTC
OMG YOU MADE MASSU EVIL AND SHIGE CRY AND HE SAW JIN AND MASSU KISSING AND OMG WHAI?!?!?!?!?!

this is baaaad... poor Shige.... pleasepleaseplease update soon????

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biancamasuda July 27 2007, 04:12:33 UTC
I-I-I-I-I-I'M S-SORRY.

I KNOW. I MADE THE POOR BABY CRY. I'M SORRY SHIGE. I'M SOOOO SORRY.

AND I'M SORRY TO YOU TOO. BECAUSE YOU HAD TO READ IT.

I feel so SAD for Shige =(.

I'll update this weekend, I hope. Work has been overwhelming beyond my life, but on the weekend I may have time =).

Thanks for reading. I'm sorry =(. I feel so...ARGH. DAMNIT MASUDA.

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shiny_satsuma July 27 2007, 05:45:20 UTC
OMGYEAY WEEKEND STARTS TOMORROW <33333333333

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biancamasuda July 27 2007, 11:55:22 UTC
YEAH. I'M DEFINITELY PUTTING EVERY ASIDE AND WRITING ON SATURDAY OR SUNDAY.

My hope is to do Chapter Six by Saturday and start 7 on Sunday =).

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snowy_yuki July 27 2007, 04:20:40 UTC
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HE SAW HE SAW HE SAW HE SAW

yes this is painful .. update soon please ..
why you're not satisfy?! this is a good chapter..

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biancamasuda July 27 2007, 04:58:27 UTC
I KNOW I KNOW I KNOW! HE SAW. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

I guess I was satisfied by the END of the chapter. But...the beginning was so boring =((((((((((((((((((((((

But thank you =D!!! <333

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biancamasuda July 27 2007, 11:58:02 UTC
I...YES I REMEMBER YOU ASLDHFSALHTLSANDGLASH.

I know. I deserve that bitch slap. In fact, I bitch slapped myself writing this. WHAT HAVE I DONE?! WHAT THE HELLZ HAVE I DONE!?!?!?!

You're on the verge of tears?! I'M SORRY. Ok well I'm kind of not, because I wanted that SO bad from this chapter. It took me like 89724598235 hours to try and make it sad. It was SO hard. And I kept changing the ending.

It was actually going to be longer, but I couldn't get myself to do it.

I...I know, I'm so sorry, Shige. I f-feel so bad!!! I CAN'T GO BACK NOW THOUGH. I CAN'T SUDDENLY MAKE MASUDA STOP AND BE LIKE "JUST KIDDING"...Can I?!

I WOULD LOVE IT.

And...I'm sorry!! I love YOU for reading. OMFG DON'T CUT YOURSELF. LSKAHFLASHKTGLKSDNGLAKSHG I'M SORRY I'M SORRY.

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biancamasuda July 27 2007, 12:06:00 UTC
EW. I WOULD NEVER END IT LIKE THAT.

I SHALL NEVER END IT IN A "DU ES MACHINA" or whatever it's called. HAHAHA. LIKE ALICE IN WONDERLAND. I HAD AN EFFING FIT.

I HATE STORIES LIKE THAT. Why would I even end it that way?!?!?! Like I didn't even think of it. SO DON'T WORRY.

W-WHAT?! N-NO SUICIDE! I'M SCARED. WELL I HOPE NO SUICIDE OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG.

GIVE HIM YOUR HEART...QUICK. Oh wait it should be ME giving it. I broke it!

NOOOO NO CUTTING TT_____TT

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biancamasuda July 27 2007, 12:01:47 UTC
YES. YOU HEARD THE SONG?!

I should have gave everyone the link and made everyone do it too. I COULDN'T STOP LISTENING TO IT WHEN I WAS WRITING IT. OH MAN. LIKE A THEME SONG.

I know. I'm so mad at Jin. I'm ESPECIALLY mad at Masuda. WHY CAN'T YOU JUST RESIST JIN. GOD, MASUDA. I HATE YOU.

Ok no. No no no, I don't. Just...for now.

HEARTBREAKING?! Yes. Well..well not "YES!"...but like...I wanted the chapter so bad to be that way LKSHDLSAHTLSKNGALSHG. And yeah I promised there would be no car/Shige scenes...there won't be =).

I don't mean to hurt Shige...it just happens =(((((((. If I switched Shige with Masuda, I would die. MY POOR MASUDA. But right now my STUPID Masuda is being such a fag galore.

YOU'RE seriously, freakin' great <3.

E-MAIL ME AT WORK PLZ =DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.

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amaikoryori July 27 2007, 11:15:28 UTC
This was sad and beautiful and I enjoyed reading. And please update soon because the suspense is ugh!

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biancamasuda July 27 2007, 12:03:32 UTC
T-Thank you *hugs*.

Suspense IS "ugh"!

I will try and update as soon as I can. LKASGHDLASHTLASKHGNSLGKH <333

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