Chocolate - Part Six

Jul 29, 2007 01:08

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple. Inseperable ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 07:43:39 UTC
I ABUSED CAPS LOCK ON YOUR FIC TOO. WE'RE SO FUNNY. OMFG.

AND SORRY FOR MAKING YOU MAD. BUT SERIOUSLY. I'M MAD TOO. I HAVE MENTAL PROBLEMS. PLZ HEAL ME.

AND EFFING KUSANO. DON'T GIVE IN TO EFFING HOT, DRUNK SHIGE. YOU ARE TAKING ADVANTAGE OF HIM, EVEN I YOU'RE NOT.

I'M SORRY. I WILL TRY NOT TO MAKE YOU DIE. I'M SORRY. I LOVE YOU.

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 08:19:05 UTC
WELL. IT'S REALLY NOT KUSANO'S FAULT...HE DOESN'T KNOW?!?!?!?!

LIKE HE HAS NO IDEA THAT SHIGE EVEN KNOWS MASUDA. BUT STILL. HE'S RUINING IT BY THE SECOND.

DARNIT.

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shiny_satsuma July 29 2007, 07:38:21 UTC
>.< im hoping Shige didnt actually sleep with Kusano.. maybe just make out or something.. because then he wouldn't really have cheated on Massu... even though Massu TOTALLY deserved it..cuz it would have made them BOTH wrong.. its always so deliciously angsty when one party didnt do anything wrong... XD

oops ._. did i forget to mention i LOVE angst.. XD

im surprised Jin is still sticking to Massu after all the revelations of his playboy side XD

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 07:47:34 UTC
LKSDHFASLHKTLSKANGLAHG.

SHIGE *DID* SLEEP WITH KUSANO. ALL THE CLOTHES...ON THE FLOOR.

But yeah, it is more angsty when one party didn't do anything wrong.

But Shige had like NO faults, and everyone felt so bad and everything. So I tried a twisted plot? I don't even know. HAHAHA.

And as for Jin...he's taken quite the liking to Masuda. Which is so intriguing to me. Jin×Masuda is STILL such a weird pairing to me, and I pretty much kind of started it. Wtf.

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shiny_satsuma July 29 2007, 09:03:24 UTC
maybe they only managed to get as far as nudity..then fell asleep!
damn...

YEA YEA!!!shige's innocence TOTALLY GOT ME... T_T but now.. he did it too! damn...

omgyeaitscuzoftheirbirthdays!

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 16:16:18 UTC
As far as nudity and then fall asleep?!?!

Yes. Maybe Kusano realized that he wasn't gay and was like "OH MAN WTF." And 10 seconds later he left the apartment.

Well. No. But. That would be nice. HAHAHA.

Yeah Shige's evil side was overdue...I NEEDED it. I didn't want to make Masuda the only bad guy. But seriously, if he didn't cheat on Shige in the first place...................................

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amaikoryori July 29 2007, 08:25:02 UTC
YOU UPDATED! YAY! And... ZOMFG Shige got drunk and jumped Kusano! ZOMG! And Notti gave in and zomfg, MASSU walked IN... okay fine, he didn't see anything save clothes. BUT OH MY GOSH I CAN'T BELIEVE IT. Update soon, onegai shimasu!

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 08:49:49 UTC
I think my next update will have to be sometime next weekend =(. But I'm going to try my hardest to update before or on Wednesday evening.

Hopefully I have time after work and stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But yeah...ARGH. DAMNIT. WHY IS EVERYONE A CHEATER IN THIS FIC. STOP.

Thanks for reading <333

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blackblood0688 July 29 2007, 10:22:25 UTC
WHAT THE F-IN' HELL WAS THAT?!? @______@ Geez...so much cheating!!

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 16:18:35 UTC
.........................

I'M SORRY.

I KNOW. CHEATING IS LIKE...BECOMING A TOTAL FAD. AND I KIND OF FEEL SORRY FOR KUSANO, WHO HAS NO IDEA WHAT'S GOING ON AND JUST ENDED UP BEING SUCKED IN.

WTH.

SORRY. WTH, MAN.

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blackblood0688 July 30 2007, 01:55:07 UTC
T___T I wanna know what happens next!!!~ *cries for Kusano*

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yuusukeichijo July 29 2007, 10:34:58 UTC
i'm like so dying to read the next chapter
gahh... why did massu just kick jin out of the apartment instead?

i dont blame shige and kusano XD
poor shige... he suffered tons. D:

i feel like being in the story and making things back to what they were. haah.
which would deem impossible XD

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 16:23:34 UTC
Masuda kick Jin out of the apartment?! What?! Masuda kick Jin out of Jin's own apartment or.................I don't know. I'm confused =D.

Yeah I don't blame Shige either. It's...revenge? Even though revenge is bad. But still. He needed...something. And Kusano is the nicest guy effing ever in this fic.

I wish I could go into the story and make it better too. Even though...I CAN. But you never know =)))

This fic isn't quite finished, yet =D!

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biancamasuda July 29 2007, 17:43:55 UTC
By the way, I'm not sure if your hours are ahead, but

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I kept seeing it everytime I went on LJ, and then I just remembered right now!

Have a good one!

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yuusukeichijo July 30 2007, 08:54:20 UTC
haha... thanks :D
i didn't notice till i was re-reading the whole thing
gahh..

someone needs to slap massu seriously D:

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