Chocolate - Part Nine

Aug 12, 2007 17:10

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin, Shige×Kusano
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

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kawaii_beela August 13 2007, 03:52:28 UTC
AWWWW!! this was a good chapter... not too much drama/action but still a nice chapter^^ great work as always ^__^

but ahhhh i feel so horrible for massu now:( that letter must have been heart breaking:(:(

and as for jin... HAHA!! i couldnt help but laugh when massu punched him! haha but jin sexy lips all cut up >< awww!! that makes me sad even tho hes such a bastard in this fic!! HAHA!!

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biancamasuda August 13 2007, 04:00:18 UTC
HAHAHA JIN'S CUT UP LIPS. I'M SO MEAN. I LOVE IT.

Yeah not much action in this. It was one of the kind of sadder ones?! I have no idea. KSDAFLKHASTLKSNG. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHO TO FEEL SORRY FOR ANYMORE.

<333333

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yuyamassu August 13 2007, 05:33:07 UTC
I just came back from my exams and i'm already half dead but when i saw you update i was Energetic again!XDDD

I guess Massu finally get his sense back~
He actually punch Jin!XD
Haha!I'm so happy~Am i evil?

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biancamasuda August 13 2007, 11:57:23 UTC
AWWW, REALLY? Thank you!!! You guys are so supportive, I'm kind of going to cry TT______________________TT

I KNOW. HE DID. GOOD, MASUDA, GOOD.

Don't worry. I was like...THRILLED I made Masuda sock Jin. And Jin already had a near-broken nose. HAHAHAHA. I think I'm funny, when I'm just really sick.

Hope your exams went well!! <333

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ercinea August 13 2007, 06:01:53 UTC
Id really like to see Massu with Jin. But I know it wouldn't work because they would argue over who got the last gyoza.
So, are we gonna find out about the lava lamps at Kusano's place? (or do I fail as a NewS fan?)

their colored clothing splashed against the neutral floor. =WIN It really is a nice metaphor for the relationships. Sort of a fresh and exciting one compared to the comfortable, bland one.

My head is about to hit the desk from sleepiness, so this may not have been very coherent. I'll have to re-read once I'm more conscious. (not like I don't read your fics more than once anyway :D)

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biancamasuda August 13 2007, 12:01:58 UTC
YOU'D LIKE TO SEE MASUDA WITH JIN?!

Excuse me?!

HAHAHA. Well. You're a rare one, that's for sure.

As the writer of the fic, *I* don't even want to see Masuda with Jin. HAHAHA. But I like that...I like you. I like how you want to see such a pairing that is so much "NO" to work. You're sweet.

And as for the lava lamps...it's actually just...like...made up. HAHA. I just did it to make him more of an interesting individual. I just wanted him to have something different in his apartment. Don't worry. You don't fail as a NewS fan =D. You're fab.

And ok...I LOVE how you quote my fic and comment on my writing. I almost literally cry. Actually, I may have...just a little. Thank you very much. It seriously, really, really, truly makes my heart feel full.

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ercinea August 13 2007, 15:47:57 UTC
I'm not sweet; I'm evil. Because I just really like seeing my favorites out of Kat-tun and News together. *evil grin*

It would be cool if there was a reason for the lava lamps. Like a lost love gave him one once or something. But then I likes me some drama.

I should be thanking you for writing so much awesome. *hugs*

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biancamasuda August 14 2007, 21:26:14 UTC
Oh but you are sweet. HAHAHA. I'm the evil one for making it even possible in a fic alksdhflashtlasndg.

But. Maybe I'll write a fic in the future when the pairing isn't frowned upon.

I wish I didn't tell the truth and said there was a reason for the lava lamps and then made one up. DARNIT. SORRY. Hahaha.

Ahsadlfhlashgsg don't thank ME. Man. You guys give me the best comments, EVER. <333

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biancamasuda August 13 2007, 12:05:03 UTC
IT DOESN'T MATTER HOW LATE YOU ARE. YOU WILL ALWAYS BE SWEET. AND THE ONLY ONE THAT WILL APPRECIATE EATING RYO'S LEG HAIR LIKE SPAGHETTI.

HAHAHAHA SCENES IN RESTAURANTS AND CLOCKING PEOPLE IN THE FACE.

I LAUGHED TOO. AND I WROTE IT. I AM SO LAME, JAN. I AM SO LAME.

YOU *ALWAYS* KILL ME...SO I GUESS I JUST HAVE TO RETURN THE FAVOUR.

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alchemy_of_yaoi August 13 2007, 10:21:37 UTC
Ah... I'm a late-reader to this fic ( ... )

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biancamasuda August 13 2007, 12:13:00 UTC
M-M-M-M-My fic k-kept you up 'til 6 am?!?!?!?!?! Or rather...you read it until 6 am?!?!?!

I'm sorry!!! But...seriously, thank you <.That really made me truly so happy =). I'm glad there are still new readers trying this fic out ( ... )

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