Eternally in Debt - Chapter Seven

[biancamasuda]

Title: Eternally in Debt
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS
Pairing: Ryo Nishikido×Takahisa Masuda, Takahisa Masuda×Yuya Tegoshi
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: WHAT THE HECK IS A DISCLAIMER? Just kidding. There's a dictionary.com, did you know that?
Summary: Takahisa Masuda finds himself stuck in a very difficult relationship with Ryo Nishikido. But after lending a

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[oofle]

Oh man a Cliffhanger! Dun Dun Dun...
You already know how much I love this so I don't really need to tell you but I felt like commenting because it's just that fantabulous.

[biancamasuda]

I know! It's my sad attempt at a very exciting cliffhanger! Hahaha.

Of course I know. And that's why I love YOU!!! <333

[epicwaters]

yatta!!

I've been looking forward to this chapter. this castle appears to be really, really huge! so exciting. the fact that yuya is carrying ryo like a sack of potatoes amuses me greatly ^_^

sorry to hear about the computer! mine died a few days before christmas and I only just recently got it back running. good luck!!! and remember to breathe... lol :)

[biancamasuda]

CARRYING RYO LIKE A SACK OF POTATOES. AHAHHAHA. IS THAT WHAT IT SOUNDS LIKE? It does, actually. That's exactly what I meant.

And yes, the castle IS very huge. I would love to be lost in that castle.

Agh broken computers are lame!! I'm glad yours is up and running now. I hope mine will be too!!

Thanks for reading! I'll try not to freak out without my computer! Hahaha.

[quinnsan]

Hmmm~ He's a bit less scared now it seems. But when he saw Ryo and he's out cold...I wonder what he's going to do next~ And what everyone else is going to do..

[biancamasuda]

Yeah he must be less scared. I mean...they aren't hurting him, right? Plus they're all sexy. How could you be scared. HAHAHA. Just kidding.

Anyway. Yes. The suspense is even killing ME. I'm nuts. I write this. I always do this.

Thanks for reading dear!!!!

[quinnsan]

Nope they aren't....though if it were me I might still be a little scared because of the fact that they're all sexy. xDDD

[biancamasuda]

I would find it quite comforting that they are all sexy. HAHAHA. Sexy = Comfort.

[romanticgraze]

Dude I literally gasped at the end! gjdsg It's a cliffhanger! Ahhh~
HOMG...I can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Belated NEWS Year to you~

[biancamasuda]

Yeah! It's my attempt!!!

Thanks! I hope I'm able to write it soon! It's been so hectic! Hope you're doing well, dear!

Happy NewS Year, haha!

[rin223]

wah~ thanks for the update!

this chapter explained so much! well...i thought it did. but now more events happen!

i like Arashi's appearances in this. somehow they fit really well. and i like how everyone's first name is used, instead of the usual last names. *nods*

hehe. i don't think i'd mind being held hostage by yamapi and kei. XD oh~ and them being vampires makes it all the more thrilling. haha. ^_^

thanks~~

[biancamasuda]

No, thank YOU for reading!

Ah it explained a lot? I'm glad! Maybe I wasn't being clearer enough in previous chapters? Let me know if I'm not. Usually I beat around the bush a lot when I write, so it's inevitable in my fics.

Yeah Arashi fit. I really loved sticking them in there. I only wanted it to be a NewS-oriented fanfiction, but it's not like they are main characters or anything, really. I like the first names too. I find it a bit different, and I dislike not being consistent. Like...using a first name for some, and last name for others. IT MUST BE CONSISTENT.

Anyway. Yeah. Yamapi and Koyama are so dang hot in this. I hate this. VAMPIRES ARE JUST SO HOT!

Thanks again, for reading!