INDIFFERENCE chapter 49

May 18, 2009 17:48

FInally, sorry gang. School and the death of my kitty set me way back. Here it is for those still hanging around. The icon is by heather. The images are by Sandi. Enjoy.

THIS ENTRY IS INTENDED FOR ADULTS AGED 21 OR OLDER. DO NOT OPEN UNLESS YOU ARE 21 OR OLDER. MAY CONTAIN SCENES OF GRAPHIC VIOLENCE OR EXPLICIT SEX.

INDIFFERENCE, Chapter 49 © 2009 Brian Hennessey )

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sandid May 19 2009, 03:01:00 UTC


WHAT? OMG - With Vic it could be ANYTHING.....

Oh, Brian....

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big_brian_o May 21 2009, 19:18:05 UTC
Yeah you know vic!

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pgcwmt May 19 2009, 05:10:49 UTC
Hot Damn, Brian, thrilled to see the update!! And yes, it was worth waiting for. I love the way you have developed Justinian. He sounds even more handsome, strong and viral. I also like the turmoil and bond between he and Slade. This has such potential, and I know you are working on it, way ahead of me. I don't like or trust the fairy, but, he actually does give food for thought. I cannot tell you how happy I am that this is continuing. I can't wait to see what incredible journeys lie ahead!!
Pam

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big_brian_o May 21 2009, 19:18:54 UTC
Thanks Pam, stay tuned. More to come. I love your icon

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pgcwmt May 22 2009, 02:30:30 UTC
I keep telling you Brian, you and I have a lot in common.......
Did you like Adam Lambert on American Idol? You know, I have this drama series running around in my head. At some point I will get brave enough to tell you about it. It just needs a talented writer..........
Pam

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big_brian_o May 21 2009, 19:19:14 UTC
It would be fun, wouldn't it??

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gabe616 May 19 2009, 06:56:26 UTC
Wow, you outdid yourself again my friend. I just have to close my eyes and I can 'see' that scene in the car. Justinian looking to dangerous indeed :-)
So many little pieces that fall into place one after the other. Can't wait to find out what Vic's going to tell Bryant and Slade.
Too bad this story will end and I sure hope you have a sequel planned? Or a bit more Brian and Boyd? Or something new? And no, I am not greedy it's all your fault because you have us hooked on your writing :-)
Gabe

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big_brian_o May 21 2009, 19:21:24 UTC
I'll always be writing something gabe

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wren_kt7oz May 19 2009, 08:45:44 UTC
Oh, Brian, so many little goodies and then that kicker of an ending.

Loved the image of Alberic letting the pixies loose. Definitely gave me a quiet chuckle.

Loved even more the image of Bryant's less than amused reaction.

Where oh where is the youtube of this incident? LOL

The conversation between Bryant and Alberic was sobering. I can see such dangers. And Alberic's right - to a degree - the fairies do have more of an escape route - although a limited and perhaps unsustainable one.

“Do you think he’s in any danger?”

A little frisson of fear there - over confidence always poses a danger, and that is what I fear for Justinian - not in his dealings with the fairies so much - but in assuming that nothing else can harm him.

*crosses fingers*

Then there are these lines, which I actually found quite funny:

... I want to retreat there after a stressful day and fuck Slade dry. Better we do that without the young slayer nearby, he can chill the ardor.For all the world like Mom and Dad being glad the kids are having a sleep ( ... )

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big_brian_o May 21 2009, 19:22:10 UTC
If you find it on you tube let me know! HHAHA! Sorry you had a bad day, but thanks for the encouragement.

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