finally

Nov 03, 2005 03:29

Here you go livejournal. This is a short story I wrote and submitted for English 210. I got a B. Enjoy ( Read more... )

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yo yo yo yo yo dozababy04 November 5 2005, 06:40:54 UTC
pretty good there, mate. i liked all the different perspectives. i hated mills, but i don't think you made me hate him as much as he should be hated. but yeah, i "dug" it. haha, hahahaha. you know, like dug out? hahahahahahahahahahaha. ah. i kill myself.

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themattdavis November 7 2005, 02:01:58 UTC
Never ceases to amaze me, the different ways stories can be told. I like it, the way you decided to write it is excellent.. Speaking of stories, I re-wrote Lucky Me, you should read it, it should be cool..

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catflo November 8 2005, 03:23:33 UTC
kirby, i thoroughly enjoyed it, as i do most of your writing. here's my favorite line, "Until we meet again ball, I’ll keep my glove warm."

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