SPN fic: B-Reel 4/4

Sep 27, 2008 21:20

Go on, last part, wrap things up…

Part 4/Things that Go Boom )

fanfic, b-reel, spn

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tabaqui September 28 2008, 19:32:22 UTC
Oh, you....you just.......
MY GOD. You went there with tentacle porn, oh jesus. And the boys, all bantery and annoyed and concerned and this affection all running along underneath.

And the last one, that was so very.....the thick, golden light, the heat, the swimming sense of need, the desire to just slip under let it happen, orange grove and turquoise pool and all their cares sliding away... Beautiful. Hilarious. Perfect. I love it!

I have several 'bits' that are favorite - i'll put them in another comment. I really enjoyed this - so fun and funny, so *boys*. Angst and laughter, always.

*waves* Welcome back! There's been all kinds of stuff going on - big bang and a couple remix challenges, the boys now living together in *real* life....
Wheeeee!

Have you watched any episodes in the new season?
*twirls you*
Self-pimping, i'm signed up to sell my self at the Sweet Charity auction, and a i did a remix which was nerve-wracking but fun as hell.

Yay, big-pink fic! Always the best!
:)

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big_pink September 28 2008, 21:50:11 UTC
I am SO glad you liked it, dolly. The tentacle porn...man, when I saw extraonions' Big List of Prompts, I thought, "Yeah. Tentacles. I could do that." I've been aware of the whole sub-genre of hentai for years (and, as an aside, I lived in Japan for 2 years in my early 20s and got a fairly substantial dose of J-cult) and thought that it would be fun to let the boys play in that pop cultural jungle gym ( ... )

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tabaqui September 28 2008, 22:52:48 UTC
How could i *not* like? It's just hysterically fun and funny and goofy and *them* and perfect. :)

I'm *aware* of tentacle porn, and have read a bit here and there, and seen a bit. It's not super high on my list of 'stuff', but it can be fun in a freaky kind of way. I love Sam's jealousy of Dean's foray into it. Just...heeeeeeeeee!

Castiel is awesome. I love that he's not all love and light, though i think threatening Dean will backfire. I do not trust him!

I also love the new Ruby. But i don't trust her, either.

OMG, if you bid on me at SC i'd probably scream. Heeeee. But what fun, what fun....*la*
I must check out your offering. I'm too broke to buy, but it's fun to look.
*twirls you*

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big_pink September 28 2008, 23:50:15 UTC
'm god. I'm already having all sorts of ideas of the stuff you could write for me!!!! Worth paying MONEY for.

Castiel IS awesome, in every sense of the world. Did the PTB not realize that what fangirls want is more awesome guys, not flimsy gals? Unless they come up with an awesome gal, I'm not biting (sorry, new Ruby; it's ok Baq, we can agree to disagree).

I think I could come up with a prompt that would be...mutually agreeable.

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Favorite bits..... tabaqui September 28 2008, 19:34:48 UTC
It hadn’t changed in years, this look, and the accompanying tone, but it still made the hair on Sam’s neck stand at attention. He’d admired this look of Dean’s at one time, practiced it in front of the mirror of whatever dingy motel Dad had named ‘home-for-a-week’. Been caught practicing it. Sam had forgotten nothing over the years, but that didn’t mean he liked to remember ( ... )

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blackcat333_99 September 28 2008, 20:39:24 UTC
OMG it's alive! Woohoo! Ahem. Okay. Fic.

budgies-gone-bad.

Dear lord. This? I want whatever you're smoking.

And then you go to the Dean/Laurel/Marti triangle, and I am horrifiedly amused. I am probably going to the Special Hell.

Oh Jeez. The toilet bowl monster?

There are NO WORDS.

Most definitely the Special Hell.

The final movie, however, it just made me feel vaguely sad, and brought things back home that in S1 we did indeed have our two boys with their messed up psyches and coping with losses (Dad and Jess) and now they only have each other and are relearning that particular dance, but it's important enough to overcome the lure of the surreality going on and...

Yeah. I don't have the right words to express myself correctly, but well done. S1 crack with some sneaky emotional grounding.

Spain, huh? I might be jealous, but I actually had a pretty great weather, even lost some weight summer of my own, so I'm simply happy for you. :)

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big_pink September 28 2008, 21:51:48 UTC
There were a few lines where I was laughing as I typed and 'budgies-gone-bad' was one of them, but it was more because I could hear Sam's voice SAYING it.

Special Hell is full of the best people, so I wouldn't worry about it too much.

Glad to hear that you had a good summer too! I may have found those pounds you lost, though? Want them back? Or should I give them to a good home?

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blackcat333_99 September 28 2008, 22:11:52 UTC
Me no wants them back. Find them a good home. Or feed them to the zombies. There seems to be a suspicious amount of activity among folk gone missing -- it's enough to make a Bobby paranoid. Even with Angels in the Outfield.

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big_pink September 28 2008, 22:15:03 UTC
Wouldn't it be great if Sam started ribbing Dean by doing the flying wings gesture at inappropriate times? Shit. I gotta work that into next year's Bear Hunt.

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irismay42 September 28 2008, 22:59:55 UTC
Welcome back! You've been greatly missed!

You know, I've been reading quite a few season 1-set fics lately, and somehow they seem a lot less complicated... I think you captured the boys' emotional state - the way they were still trying to get back into step with one another - perfectly here. They're both kind of jealous of the other's freedom - be it Dean's social and sexual freedom or Sam's brief period of freedom from Dad and from hunting - at this point, and still trying to make some kind of connection with each other.

I have to say, the toilet monster? Not a scene I can ever imagine Kripke writing, but abso-fudgin'-lutely hilarious all the same!

Kinda makes me wish I'd seen some of the movies you reference here - I've not even seen Pirates of the Caribbean 2!!

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big_pink September 28 2008, 23:52:42 UTC
Dude. You gotta get out more. I have an excuse, I have KIDS, but seriously, I used to see at least 3 movies a WEEK. Go out and see them, not rent them or whathaveyou. I am a serious SUCKER for film. I once took my holidays at work so I could go to the Toronto Film Festival. So, you need to rent some serious stuff, girlie (though nothing replaces that big-ass screen).

Ah, season 1. I miss you and yet? I like complicated. It was just a little much to get my feet wet with after so long away. I think Kripke could TOTALLY write a toilet monster. I'm WAITING for it.

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gottalovev September 29 2008, 00:28:30 UTC
that was really awesome! it's so nice to read you again. I have missed you! I was wondering where you were, but look at that, frolicking in Spain, you lucky one! congratulation on the book, too =D

this fic is a great surprise, and I got to say that it made me laugh quite a bit. I loved the reference to movies, and although I admit not seeing all of them, I could imagine it all. Y tu mama tambien did a lasting impression on me and I loved the atmosphere you put in that last section of the fic.

How to sum all of Dean's behavior? I don't know, but... Oh, Dean, you horny guy you. *pets*. Sam was quite funny too, although it was not all laughs and giggles. but the subtitles? OMG. that's crack alright! ;)

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big_pink September 29 2008, 00:55:05 UTC
Squeeee!!! I was thinking of you today, actually, wishing you lived in Halifax because I'm off there tomorrow and I have no one to visit :( I should do a post and see if there are any spn girls in Halifax, shouldn't I?

The subtitles I've been wanting to write for, like, forever. Ask Lemmypie. I've been talking about making subtitles since the year before last, I swear.

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gottalovev September 29 2008, 12:20:39 UTC
hi darling! I've never seen Halifax, alas. you should do a shoot out to find fangirls over there! I don't know any myself though. You know, my boy (in 5th grade) is probably going to go to Ottawa on a field trip with school at the end of the year, see museums and all. Made me think of you! I'll take them myself next summer too, I think. he's not the only one allowed to do the cool stuff ;)

the subtitles are such a great idea. I guess it's to find the proper way to put it in fic that was more tricky! I got to say the out of sync dubbing was pretty hilarious too ;)

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