Day one. "Succession"

Aug 30, 2010 07:00

Title: Succession
Pairing: Chiyo/Danzo
Rating: PG
Warnings: It's poetry! But free-verse! And there's a story! No rhyming, no iambic pentameter, but lots of. Repetition. And unusual punctuation. Definitely not to be read once.
Summary: Danzo's life in... free-verse poetry. Yep. Emphasis on his changing views on family and relationships throughout ( Read more... )

works: story

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senyum September 1 2010, 08:41:40 UTC
This is really cool xD I love the style. And the content. lol all of it really.

Maybe this is just the way I read it, but I like the way it's not... judgmental? Not right or wrong, just a practical solution or a different way of doing things. But, yeah, super cool~

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shirohime777 September 3 2010, 20:11:38 UTC
That was so amazing. I'm not usually one for interpretive stuff, but i really liked this. I liked how Danzou seemed to be connected to almost everyone in the village and Sai's backstory. LOL it kind of reminds me of that whole thing in Evangelion where they end up saying that "Our bonds with other people are what shape us and give us an understanding of ourselves." Or something like that.

*thumbs up.*

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