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May 26, 2006 11:04

Subject: [Reuse] Life Preserver
Title: Life Preserver
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disparue May 26 2006, 03:23:05 UTC

Left my (longer, more giddy) review on the post for it in your lj, but I must say it once more:

THAT WAS SO GREAT.

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uchihanaruto May 26 2006, 03:29:11 UTC
XD Thanks again for the great idea!

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lain_chan16 May 26 2006, 04:54:43 UTC
;.; That was sad, but amazing! I thought it was going to be Sasuke who died, but the ending was perfect. Great job!

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uchihanaruto May 26 2006, 08:16:13 UTC
Thank you! It was actually all disparue's idea, so she's more responsible for this than I am! ^^

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azamaria_chan May 26 2006, 05:02:24 UTC
Hi, mod here!

First and most importantly, you did a wonderful job with disparue's challenging plot bunny. This was so heartbreaking and very realistic and I thought you did a nice job with the characterization.

Just two things to let you know.

“You’re master is dead,” one says grimly. There's just a small typo in this line, it should be your.

And if you wouldn't mind putting "[Reuse] Life Preserver" in the subject header, that would be lovely.

Again, awesome job and hope to see more fics from you! :)

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uchihanaruto May 26 2006, 08:18:35 UTC
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes ^^;

I'll be happy to write more if my muse cooperates!

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admiral_yen May 26 2006, 09:05:19 UTC
T^T Oh jezz... I hope you're happy... you've made me all angsty and tear-ridden before I called it quits for the night. *muffled sob*

Beautifully written and the first wonderful recycle here! I enjoyed this very much and would like to congratulate you on a wonderful post back to a recycled idea... nicely done! ;)

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uchihanaruto May 26 2006, 09:07:31 UTC
^^ That's the whole point of reading deathfics, isn't it?

Thank you for reading!

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gonrie August 24 2006, 14:13:59 UTC
Really good fic!

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