First and most importantly, you did a wonderful job with disparue's challenging plot bunny. This was so heartbreaking and very realistic and I thought you did a nice job with the characterization.
Just two things to let you know.
“You’re master is dead,” one says grimly. There's just a small typo in this line, it should be your.
And if you wouldn't mind putting "[Reuse] Life Preserver" in the subject header, that would be lovely.
Again, awesome job and hope to see more fics from you! :)
T^T Oh jezz... I hope you're happy... you've made me all angsty and tear-ridden before I called it quits for the night. *muffled sob*
Beautifully written and the first wonderful recycle here! I enjoyed this very much and would like to congratulate you on a wonderful post back to a recycled idea... nicely done! ;)
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Left my (longer, more giddy) review on the post for it in your lj, but I must say it once more:
THAT WAS SO GREAT.
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First and most importantly, you did a wonderful job with disparue's challenging plot bunny. This was so heartbreaking and very realistic and I thought you did a nice job with the characterization.
Just two things to let you know.
“You’re master is dead,” one says grimly. There's just a small typo in this line, it should be your.
And if you wouldn't mind putting "[Reuse] Life Preserver" in the subject header, that would be lovely.
Again, awesome job and hope to see more fics from you! :)
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I'll be happy to write more if my muse cooperates!
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Beautifully written and the first wonderful recycle here! I enjoyed this very much and would like to congratulate you on a wonderful post back to a recycled idea... nicely done! ;)
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Thank you for reading!
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