Sometimes if it werent for the plane tickets...

[bigg_andy]

there are times when it would be really nice to pushed a little... like just when i start to feel comfortable a little bit ... mostly what im talking about is going back to school... and its not just that ive had a great time with friends the last three weeks... but thats definitly part of it... another part is my family... every time i leave i

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[sorcutt]

Be a little more self absorbed and stop trying so hard to make everyone happy. It may be selfish as hell but it will save you from constantly trying to appease others and you'll most likely live a happier life.

Oh, and for the love of god, don't use 'cuz' in poems.

[bigg_andy]

well... when its published... ill change it... oh... and dont start sentences with an interjection followed by a conjunction thinking the interjection was a seperate predicate if you are going to use semi-proper grammar in the rest of the sentence

[sorcutt]

Your last statement about my grammar is null and void. On LJ there is actually a black hole that sucks all proper grammar out of sentences thus making these sentences incoherent in the non virtual world but completey correct on LJ. Everyone knows that, duh

[bigg_andy]

not true... if you used proper quotation marks and not the sub-quote marks (i dont know their real names)... oh and also if you didnt put the interjection and the conjunction you would have started the sentence with a preposition... faux pas... try harder... or stop trying... like me