Apocalypse, Part 6

[biggerbeans]

Title: Apocalypse [6/?]
Disclaimer: Don't own Heroes. Don't claim to own Heroes. But I sure do love Heroes.
Main Characters: Matt Parkman, Mohinder Suresh, Molly Walker
Word Count: 5840
Rating: This chapter is rated M for violence.
Genre: General/Drama/ZOMBIE.
Notes: I realize that this took way too freaking long to get out. Over two months, if I'm

Comments

[i_sudoku]

Glad you finally update! (that is not a criticism, jut being happy)

Poor Molly! Apparently everyone can drive! :)

I am not a big fan of Zombies, except some well written ones like "28 Days later", "Shaun of the Dead", and yours *g*

I hope we will see cameos of some other characters soon.

[biggerbeans]

There actually was a cameo way back in Part 3 of a certain petty theif... see if you can spot him!

I'm not sure how I can really weave other characters into the story without making them...dead, you know? But we'll see, we'll see.

Thanks for reading! :3

[i_sudoku]

I will check the part 3 again, I forgot what it's about :)

I meant they could meet some other characters when they reach somewhere safer, so they don't have to be dead. Up to you though, it's your story and 3M plus Nathan are my favourites

[i_sudoku]

I checked them. Was it Claude?

[rogueslayer452]

I've just discovered this fabulous continuing story and have read it from the beginning to here, and I have to say I'm wondering why I hadn't done so before. I really like that you constructed an atmosphere that is filled with suspense and danger, and our lovely characters are trying to deal with what's happening even if they have limited resources and also figuring out how to stay alive. It's nice to see a zombie apocalypse written in the Heroes 'verse that isn't overly campy or ridiculous

[biggerbeans]

HOLY CRAP, THAT MADE MY DAY :DDD

Thank you so much! *flails happily*. Campy zombie stuff is always fun, but it gets old fast when you write more than two parts.

I don't even know what to say, other than you're awesome *tears of joy*

[barhaven]

I should get a comment up for you before you go to England. I hope you continue this when you get back.

I love fics where Molly gets to be awesome. Even when she's scared, she's such a brave kid. The scene at the end nailed that: trying her best when she's throw into a situation where she has to act, even if she's terrified. I'd say I'm waiting for her to get a chance to waste a zombie later, but after reading The Walking Dead, I'm hesitant to wish that on ANY kiddie.

"I know how to point and shoot."

This made me LOL, assuming it's post-Bennet-shooting. Sorry, Noah. XD

Nothing ever goes according to plan in a zombiepocalyse, huh? Your action scenes are nicely done, but I think the best visual for me was Matt leaning out the window trying to get the zombies' attention, and seeing them all staring up and him and wanting to eat his flesh.

From what you said in the PM you sent, I'm eager to see how this plays out next. If you need any help with that brainstorming when you get back to the fic, let me know.

Again, MOAR BRAINZ nice

[biggerbeans]

You are awesome and wonderful and so encouraging :3. I already have five pages done of Part 7 and plan to continue the fic while I'm in England....as long as my roommates don't find out -_-;

It's funny that you said that your best visual came when Matt was calling the zombie, because I got the best visual while writing that part to. Sometimes when I write my eyes go totally unfocused and the scene is so clear in my head. At that point my fingers just fly and I don't really have a say in what they type. Most times it comes out okay.

Gah! Look at me, babbling like an old geezer. Thank you!