Apocalypse, Part 2

Apr 10, 2008 13:28

Title: Apocalypse, Part 2
Disclaimer: Don't own Heroes. Don't claim to own Heroes. But I sure do love Heroes.
Main Characters: Matt Parkman, Mohinder Suresh, Molly Walker.
Word Count: 5144

Rating: This chapter is rated PG-13 for course language and some violence. The fic as a whole is rated M.
Genre: Drama/General/ZOMBIES...!
Notes: This is my first ( Read more... )

matt, zombie, molly, mohinder, fic

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arabella_w April 11 2008, 05:05:43 UTC
oh my!! I'm so anxious right now!! this is getting sooo exciting!! I love it! what else can I say? Heroes+Zombies is a great formula!

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biggerbeans April 11 2008, 05:19:59 UTC
Eeee! I get excited when other people get excited! Thanks for the feedback :)

MattBean for you! See if you can collect them all!

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purplewind88 April 13 2008, 00:10:11 UTC
Oh my god. That made me want to go get my Wii out and play Umbrella chronicles. That was the best. I loved how you put in little parts using thier powers. Like Matt's mind reading being great for zombie detection and Matt using his mind control to make some shoot. Because I want do that almost every time I see a zombie movie. SHOOT THE MOTHER FUCKER IN THE HEAD YOU MORON!!! I don't know why you feel guilt about killing something trying to kill you. I can kind of understand if if you don't already know...but after you've been attacked. Bitch please. Although I understood like Jim in 28 Days Later. Killing a kid would be a bit much for me too..

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biggerbeans April 13 2008, 06:02:45 UTC
Like I said up the page a little, I'm trying to stay away from their powers as much as I can, since I find they sometimes distract from the character, but little hints here and there are nice.

P.S. What's an Umbrella Chronicle? x___x

P.P.S. THANNKK YOUU

P.P.P.S. You were zombified last time, so ZOMBIEBean for you!

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barhaven April 13 2008, 15:45:27 UTC
P.S. What's an Umbrella Chronicle? x___x

Hee. Resident Evil: Umbrella Chronicles. It's the latest Resident Evil game, a zombie-killing rail shooter for the Wii. Zero Punctuation summed it up pretty LOLtastically. ("The Umbrella Corporation is a bio-weapons giant with very gullible investors, a bizarre obsessive-compulsive tendency to build secret research labs under things, and a policy for exclusively hiring one-armed stroke victims to handle all their dangerous viruses.")

I WILL leave a real comment on this chapter! I've had a cold kicking my ass all weekend, so I'm behind on comments. Great chapter, though. :)

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purplewind88 April 13 2008, 16:24:13 UTC
Resident Evil: The Umbrella Chronicles. It's like the origins of Resident Evil and utterly kick ass. Lot's of zombies and freaky creatures.
Obtained a ZOMBIEBEAN!

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Awesome!! illaturoserro April 13 2008, 01:20:11 UTC
Oh. My god. Zombies ( ... )

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Re: Awesome!! biggerbeans April 13 2008, 06:10:14 UTC
Normal people discuss the weather and hobbies and news; we discuss zombie take-over scenarios, escape routes and what car would be best to drive, what dealership we'd steal it from, what supplies we'd need, what stores to loot, where to meet up, what direction we'd travel (we live in Michigan, so we're kind of fucked >.>) It's so much fun to discuss.YOUR FRIENDS ARE AWESOME. I try to do the same thing with my friends, but they are too distracted by silly things like essays and credit card payments. Pah! Essays and credit cards will mean nothing when the zombies take over! Fools ( ... )

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barhaven April 16 2008, 10:39:25 UTC
Send you one of those little AIM-message things with my comments in it, since I owed you a reply for the one you sent. Comments on this chapter, plus a reply for what you mentioned in your message. :)

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biggerbeans April 16 2008, 11:36:39 UTC
I'll still give you a MattBean

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More please anonymous May 6 2008, 06:23:26 UTC
And soon :)
Very good for first time creative writer.

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Re: More please biggerbeans May 6 2008, 06:28:16 UTC
Ack! I know! I decided to put the story on hiatus for most of April so I could focus on my exams. Now that they are over (Woot! Holy crap, woot!) I hope to get more of this done as soon as I can. Part three is...half-written so far, but I'm working on it!

Just sit tight and don't get bitten! And enjoy your shiny new MohinderBean!

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