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Dec 28, 2009 02:56

title: Que sera, sera
author: biggrstaffbunch
pairing: Harry/Ginny
warning(s): Post-DH
summary: What will be, will be. Ginny turns seventeen, and she--along with Harry--learns that distance does not only make the heart grow fonder, but more true as well.
a/n: This was written almost a year ago for the takingitinturns challenge. I never finished it, then, much to ( Read more... )

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etzyofi December 28 2009, 07:58:00 UTC

JKHFKGSD8HUJAIDFUGBSDJAKDFGUYHJWEO G-D THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.

pluschi December 28 2009, 14:11:18 UTC

This was absolutely beautiful. A very warm style of writing also.
Thanks!

snuggle_muggle December 28 2009, 15:28:22 UTC

This is very beautiful. I really enjoyed the imagery as well as the story itself. The use of color and the way it repeats and blurs and comes into focus again through the story is lovely. The sensory images you evoke with your words are really incredible. So very glad I read this.

tosca1390 December 28 2009, 15:56:40 UTC

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

AHHHHHHHHH.

This is wonderful. You write them SO WELL. The sensory images, the longing, Ginny's struggle with independence and emotion--I mean, it's lovely. Just so lovely. This makes me miss you and your writing so much. Just beautiful, dear.

dollsome December 28 2009, 20:54:55 UTC

Oh jeez wow! The atmosphere in this is amazing -- so thick and detailed and stifling, it conjured such a vivid sense of Ginny's headspace, I just love how you did that. The writing in the first section, in particular, is just fascinating; I love how you move from such dense narrative to Harry's slightly simpler point of view to the last section which feels a lot freer, due to the dialogue and everything; ha ha, I am in the height of my Christmas break lethargy, so I'm sure I'm not communicating this well at all, but BASICALLY! I really like how the shape & tone of the story matches the plotty subject material that's going on, I think that is awesome. And, God, the lines in here! I don't even know what to pick out. Because you stare into space like a widow of the water, the card reads in her dad's slanting script. By all means, love with all your heart and live with dreams in your eyes, but my dear, do not forget that you are a long way yet from looking for lost men at sea. We love you, Ginny, and we miss you. was just like -- so ( ... )