Story snippet

[bighooves]

“Oh honey,” trilled the bottle-blond sales clerk, in her most money-hungry purr, “You’ve just gotta try this.”

The smile on her lips was as fake as her Jack O’Lantern tan. The gold nametag on her chest said Debbie- and like any other person who has spent a Christmas in retail, her eyes were filled with poison.

Like a frightened horse, I reared back

Comments

[penella22]

delicious! but what happens next?

[nigefoxx]

You write with a great deal of enthusiasm which brings the story to the mind's eye well.

[r2q2boing]

More!