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Apr 29, 2009 00:05



Unloved

Here I am again.. standing outside your house at night.. Watching you ... and him.

Ring ... ring..

” Hello? .. ”

”....”

” Hello?.. who is it?” a tired sigh

” It’s him again, isn't it?” I can hear his voice in the background ”Just hang up”

And then I hear the unmistakable sound that signals the end of the call.

You don't know what this feels ( Read more... )

jaemin, one-shot, angst, jaeho

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Comments 16

irene014 April 28 2009, 23:26:24 UTC
"When i am forced to watch you have sex with him.. have sex , not make love, like you and I used to do.. "

Yunho is a stalker watching JaeMin sex WOW that is just creepy O__o

this is sad as much as i like Jaemin my true otp i really wanted to see a Jaeho ending *shot*

gah i can't believe i said that but i can't help it, your style of writing sucked me into it! LOVE IT KEEP IT UP ^^

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bigjaehofan April 29 2009, 05:03:47 UTC
Thank you so much <3
i'm glad you liked it.. i know what you mean with the jaeho ending.. i prefer it too but sometimes it seem not to be :P

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amouralamer April 29 2009, 01:48:28 UTC
I really liked this. But unlike irene014, I'm glad it didn't have a happy JaeHo ending.

NEVER. EVER kill the JaeMIn! XD

Btw - Your icon is utter <3!

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bigjaehofan April 29 2009, 05:08:06 UTC
Thanks^^ im glad you liked it :D
yeah i love jaemin to but i must edmit (spell? :S) that jaeho is my favoritt.. but this time jaemin fit better ^^

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vlpdnsu68 April 29 2009, 02:20:51 UTC
:O T.T end of yunjae... poor yunniiiiiiiiiiiiiie T.T i luved this :D <3 great job

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bigjaehofan April 29 2009, 05:08:31 UTC
Hehe Im glad you liked it ^^

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shouichi April 29 2009, 09:43:57 UTC
I love the way this crazy stalker told us about his story! It's make sad!
..But when i see the ending is jaemin..I smiled! 8D *love jaemin*(if that man were not min I would cursed him,not smiling!)
.I wanna know the reason of they brokeup!X(

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bigjaehofan April 29 2009, 09:58:54 UTC
Hehe crazy stalker!Yunho ^^
Yeah I was planing to make changmin mean or something but I just couldn't.. he is just too cute ^^
And about the break up.. i did not make one because it is supose to represent any situionsen, but the poin is that one of them cant let go and still want the other one back even it the other have moved on a long time ago...

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yoosu_sarang April 29 2009, 13:08:07 UTC
me likey it.
really.
or more the time where Yunho is the creepy stalker lad.
<33

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bigjaehofan April 29 2009, 16:04:50 UTC
LoL^^ i'm glad you liked it^^

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