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bigjaehofan

Sinner

Jan 05, 2009 20:59

Sinner

He was looking at me, I know he was. I could feel his eyes bore into my neck. He was just staring; with out even pretending that he was paying attention to the teacher. I could not even turn around to make him stop, because of that hideous teacher always make sure to catch me if I ever were to whisper or do anything else that could “ ( Read more... )

jaeho

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masterjaeuknow January 6 2009, 19:24:45 UTC

spot!

masterjaeuknow January 6 2009, 19:29:27 UTC

well yah i read it. Its all good.
LMAO.....
Wow Yunho is so....GAY. Someone confessing
about me being soulmate with them
and all will make me totally freak out
and run away from that person.
LOL
Aniwaise! update soon okay???? I want to read.
Yesterday i went to china buffet and my fortune candie says:
"The saints are the sinners who keep on trying."
cool aint it? thats why i read ur story when i saw
ur title....it says 'sinner' and it reminded me. LOL.
oh welps, I'm talking too m uch isnt it?
Love you!

~master

bigjaehofan January 6 2009, 20:07:52 UTC

thank you so much !!
i am so glad you liked it
i try to update soon... got to get a new idea first:D
thanks for reading<3<3<3

hana_cho January 6 2009, 20:46:00 UTC

it is good ^^

so what is jae's sin? I really want to know that.
keep on, ne

bigjaehofan January 6 2009, 22:54:42 UTC

it wasn't really clear but jaejoong's sin was that he too was gay but he does not accept it and sees it as a sin to like guyes.... does that help?

thanks for reading:D
<3<3<3

meheartyunho January 6 2009, 21:12:16 UTC

I liked it XD poor ho =( confessing in front of everybody and getting rejected like that *sniffle*

you're norwegian? I'm swedish :D pretty close hehe XD
I want more *puppy eyes* gimme some yunjae loving~~ ;D

bigjaehofan January 6 2009, 23:05:04 UTC

yeah i felt bad for him when i wrote it:/
yeah Im norwegian :D not to far from you :)
i try to write more, just got to get some ideas first:D
i probleby won't continue on this one though.
thanks for reading
<3<3<3

rajakormi January 6 2009, 21:45:11 UTC

i love this. please continue with it.

bigjaehofan January 6 2009, 23:09:36 UTC

you really liked it?? great <3<3<3
but i probleby won't continue on this one... sorry but maybe i make somthing simmeler some other time.
anyway thank you some much for reading:D
<3<3<3

rajakormi January 8 2009, 08:57:07 UTC

aww that's a shame. oh well i look forward to your next fic, if this fic is somethign to go by i'm sure it will be brilliant ^__^