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bigmarianfan

FANFICTION!!

Oct 20, 2009 21:55

Title: A bath to remember.....

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Silvia and BMF (I wish) Pepa

A/N Well I thought since there has been a lot of shower smut going round, that some bath smut was needed. Oh and I used Junebuggys competition idea to crank it up a notch, hope you dont mind mistress!! There will obviously be another part to this or maybe two depending ( Read more... )

Comments 18

lenageek October 20 2009, 00:21:57 UTC

Qué?! Damn, you just stopped!! I was getting all worked up and then - bam! LOL, what a great, fantastically smutty gem you've created! ;D I say the PepSi fandom should go on a tear and do all smutfics with some form of water for the next few weeks! Haha!

"Pepa, this is utterly pointless, we all know I never lose at anything, but if you insist, let the games begin honey".

This line is made of pure WIN!!

bigmarianfan October 20 2009, 18:31:20 UTC

ha I am sorry to leave a cliffhanger, but its all the rage on this forum! Yes I think you are right, the water smut is AWSOME!!! sorry to get you all worked up, the next chapter will hopefully make up for it!

lenageek October 20 2009, 18:46:14 UTC

Lol, I may do cliffhangers, but in my ongoing fic, I will have an end eventually. There just might be a few cliffhangers before I get there, that's all! Hee hee!

As for smut, I do have a few smut ideas in mind but they don't involve water. Maybe I'll try to reference water at least - lol!

Ooh, there's another chapter? Sweeett!

qosmio18 October 20 2009, 01:36:46 UTC

Let the games begin! Ohh another competition. Thehehe like a lil' school girl.

Well if your user name wasn't BMF, my money would be on Pepa. Hands down. Especially with this scene "Pepa's toe found its destination between Silvia's legs and she began to mimic the slow circular movements on Silvias clit that she was experiencing herself. Oh fuck this was going to be harder than she thought." But either way its a WIN for the readers. :p

bigmarianfan October 20 2009, 18:32:49 UTC

glad you enjoyed it my love and you are right, its a win win situation for the readers and for me!! I wonder who is going to lose!

lenageek October 20 2009, 18:47:20 UTC

I wonder who is going to lose!

Ah hahahahahaaa! No one, I hope!

qosmio18 October 20 2009, 23:41:41 UTC

My guesses who will lose or should I say what will be the tub and water. Mind blowing sex from equally hot counterparts ummm doesn't seem like a disadvantage. Could you imagine a competition where those were the odds.............................................................................................Ohh Ok I'm back I was answering my own question. So Yes i can imagine. And it's ALL GOOD :DD

*Cough part II cough* Eyebrows going up and down frantically.

foot_print_1 October 20 2009, 07:47:59 UTC

My goodness! You stop there? You are truly evil, truly evil indeed.

Anyway, great, great chapter! It was filled with eroticism, it was practically dripping of the screen and onto my desk, no kidding! One word: sexy! Where have you been all my life?

I love this whole idea of a sex competition, it's fun to see them being tortured by horniness =D Pretty please, with sugar on top, update soon!

bigmarianfan October 20 2009, 18:35:12 UTC

I am really evil mwah ha ha (thats my evil laugh btw!) I dont know where I have been all your life, but I am not going anywhere now so we can catch up for eternity!! Yes there will be an update very sooon do not fear!

vickiheartpepsi October 20 2009, 08:14:02 UTC

oooooooh.....aaaaaaaaaah....omg!!!wooooo...*droools......then snapped bak to reality*..wha- what?? *scrolls up and down the page over and over again*..what?!! o right...it's the end of the chapter....DAMN IT!*face palm's self*:P
maaaan!!!!!!*grabs ice packs and shoves them in my top...resulting with steam rising out of my top* that was ....woooooooo!!

bigmarianfan October 20 2009, 18:36:09 UTC

haaaaaaaaaaaa that was hilarious..I am sorry for the cliffhanger and that you resorted to shoving ice down your top although it has conjured up a GREAT image in my head, believe me!

selinakris October 20 2009, 08:55:46 UTC

Ooh, I love competitions between these 2, and this looks like it's gonna be fun. I now know what i'll be thinking of all day instead of working *snickers*

bigmarianfan October 20 2009, 18:37:06 UTC

Yep, I was thinking about what I am going to write in my next installment instead of working today...ahhh my brain/mind will NEVER leave the gutter EVER!