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fic: Arizona Is Hot and So Are You

Feb 04, 2013 01:50

first: I uploaded a few sick!Dean fics onto my AO3 that I'd originally only posted on comment fic memes. Check them out if you want: Man Sneezes, Power of Song, and Can't Complain.

Title: Arizona Is Hot and So Are You
Fandom: Supernatural
Genre: pwp, hurt/comfort
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean
Words: ~1100
Spoilers: none
Warnings: ice ( Read more... )

hurt!dean, my fic, sam/dean, i made something, pwp, spn

Comments 11

badbastion February 4 2013, 11:20:11 UTC

Ahhhh I love it. Broken ribs!Dean is my favorite Dean, and I don't even know why, but how lucky for me that you wrote him that way! \o/ So helpless, lying there sweating, barely able to move.

I love the grabby hands gesture; that's so perfectly Dean. Your characterization of both of them is lovely (Dean rubbing the drinks all over himself, the little bickeringt where Sam lies about Dean being gross.)

I know I wrote the prompt, but still, reading Sam's cold hands splayed out over Dean's body and Dean reacting the way he does is superhot. I love how Sam keeps working him, esp the curve of the collarbone, that is a really sexy image. And the ending, hnnnnngh. Love how dean like, points him in that direction, like, "come on, do it." The cold hand in the boxers, the ice in the mouth.

I'm really glad they finally got A/C in the end, haha.

Thanks so much for filling my prompt! I love it!

biketest February 4 2013, 14:15:44 UTC

I'm so glad you like it! It was such a great prompt. And ribs are totally the cutest bone for Dean to break. :) I'm really happy that you liked the characterization of Sam too, I never feel like I completely get him.

Thank you for such a lovely comment!

runedgirl February 6 2013, 00:57:29 UTC

Lovely imagery, Dean's muscular body under Sam's hands....nicely done :)

biketest February 6 2013, 03:31:02 UTC

Thanks so much! :)

meesasometimes February 6 2013, 13:49:35 UTC

literally and figuratively hot

biketest February 6 2013, 23:57:44 UTC

Lol! Thank you. :)

ousoonerfan February 10 2013, 17:17:35 UTC

By all definitions this is freakin hot :)

biketest February 11 2013, 16:41:00 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you thought so. :D

analineblue February 14 2013, 00:08:15 UTC

Very, very nice! I enjoyed this a lot. I especially love how focused Sam is here on Dean - it all felt very IC. And of course it was a pretty nice visual, too! :)

biketest February 14 2013, 00:47:31 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)