new poem - "frome"

[bikz]

This is about suicide - not suicidal, just bored. And by the way, I haven't got my rhyming wrong - "Frome" as in the river is pronounced how it looks, unlike the town.

"Frome"
lost in the night where all is dark

Comments

[anonymous]

i really love that poem, so depressing... yet so good. the syntax is really quite excellent. i commend you on your great effort.

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[bikz]

Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it. :) But .... who are you!?

b.k. x