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vejgurl in bill100

Two Drabbles, As Usual

May 03, 2005 00:16

Title: Working for a Living
Word count: 100
Rating: G
Character or pairing: Bill
Challenge name: Sacrifice

( An eldest son's gots to do what an eldest son's gots to do )

Comments 5

ragdoll May 3 2005, 04:26:00 UTC

LOL They're both hysterical! *applauds*

On top of that, there was the blonde bird to deal with. She was obnoxious. She was vain. She was impossible to ditch.

I can't tell you how much I love that line, esp. after I just wrote this.

vejgurl May 4 2005, 02:38:15 UTC

Hee! Thanks :D

That was interesting...I never really thought of her that way before.

(actually, I've never thought of Fleur in any way except OMGANNOYING :P)

ragdoll May 4 2005, 03:47:06 UTC

Aw, thanks. I actually issued myself a challenges by picking her to write about rather than someone easier and more likeable.

I'm really hoping that HBP starts with something like 'It was a pity Fleur Delacour had been hit by the Knight Bus and flattened like one of Mrs. Weasley's pancakes. Bill was noticeably upset but his entire family knew he'd bounce back soon enough...' :) So yes, OMGANNOYING!!

nikgirl May 5 2005, 14:16:15 UTC

I totally love the pace!! The way the next sentences contradict, or almost match the first sentences... yeah, I love that! Made them really fun to read.
I can tell you're a genius just by reading these, btw.

vejgurl May 9 2005, 16:26:40 UTC

HAHA! Glad you liked them.

That's pacing? I always thought it was math. If I break my 100 words down into a few equal parts, I can't go wrong :P