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Clarity (1/1) - A Bones Fic.

Sep 20, 2009 22:17

Title: Clarity.
Author: billpickle
Rating: PG
Pairing: BB
Word Count: 1,149
Spoilers: This one's littered with references from 5x01's Harbingers in the Fountain.
A/N: A thanks to _missmargaret_ for a look-over as well as general awesomeness :).
Disclaimer: I do not own Bones, nor do I own the line so famously used by the creator of said show. I also don't own John Mayer ( Read more... )

pairing: booth & brennan, tv shows: bones :), fic: bones

Comments 40

pocofuoco September 21 2009, 17:50:05 UTC

This was just fantastic! Great job in portraying the characters - your Brennan & Booth were spot-on! Booth's sentence makes me melt...

Excellent story!

billpickle September 21 2009, 22:57:05 UTC

Awww, thank you! I'm glad you felt that my Booth & Brennan were spot-on. If that's not the most important thing, then I don't know what is...

Thanks for reading!

buffyangellvr23 September 21 2009, 19:59:45 UTC

nice work, although I hope they get to the "I love you" soon.

billpickle September 21 2009, 22:58:06 UTC

I do too. But even if we have to wait, we know that once that time comes, it will all have been worth it.

Thanks for reading!

thegryphin September 21 2009, 20:48:16 UTC

GAH!!!! I am SUCH A SAP and this was JUST PERFECT!!! And the ending? GUH...I'm all warm and fuzzy and slobbery now.

“Now go back to sleep sweetheart, it's been a long day.”

I'm such a sucker for hand-holding, head kisses and terms of endearments. *sigh*

Great job!

billpickle September 21 2009, 23:00:06 UTC

Awwww, thanks hon! *giggles at your icon*

I'm a sucker for endearments and little things like that too. I still can't get over the fact that he actually baby-ed her. Awww, Booth! As if I didn't already have a bagillion reasons to love you :)

I like too, how it kinda just slips out of him without any real recognition. It's like he can't help himself, you know?

Thanks for reading and commenting, hon :).

doc_3 September 21 2009, 22:10:24 UTC

Loved it! I loved the way you ended this, it has such promise :)

billpickle September 25 2009, 06:42:05 UTC

Thanks! I think the promise that comes across here, had something to do with the promise that the ending of the episode itself, had :).

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billpickle September 25 2009, 06:46:48 UTC

Oh, John Mayer. Tsk tsk. I'm sorry, but after let down after let down after let down for Margaret over there? I'm going to have to rely on Jack Johnson a little more than usual :).

I'm glad you like the title. I was giving everything a re-read, with my ipod on shuffle and this came up. And it was like ooooh, that could work!.

I'm not gonna lie, the whole parentheses thing? I kinda adopted it from you (if you don't mind). I know exactly what you mean, about them adding something. It just gives the piece this extra thing... which I love.

BP, never stop being so awesome, okay? :)

I can't promise that, but I can promise I'll always try!