Somewhere Only We Know (1/1) - A Bones Fic.

Oct 19, 2009 16:13

Title: Somewhere Only We Know.
Author: billpickle
Rating: PG
Pairing: BB
Word Count: 2,137
Spoilers: Heavy on spoilers for 5x05's A Night At The Bones Museum.
A/N: If you haven't already read bite_or_avoid's post-ep fic here. you've clearly been really busy or living under a rock. So I suggest you go read it when you can. Title comes from the Keane song of the same name ( Read more... )

pairing: booth & brennan, tv shows: bones :), fic: bones

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lizook12 October 20 2009, 21:08:10 UTC
You write them so perfectly - no heavy handedness here, just wonderfully IC Booth and Brennan. It's a breath of fresh air.

It's only the second time she's genuinely smiled all night, both times having been meant for him and he likes that.
Love this moment, so intimate in a room full of other people.

I adored what you did with the coffe/pie not only in reference to how they tasted to him pre and post her appearance, but the mention of it later when he kisses her, the thought that it tastes delectable...

“Shhh. I just want you to feel this. I want us to remember what this- what us, feels like.”
And now I'm flat lining. My word, how gorgeous. It caught me off guard in its honesty, the depth of the emotion.

“Based on your actions right now and your words a few moments ago, I'd conclude that, yes, you indeed did what to kiss me.”
Completely, utterly Brennan. Leave it to her to be logical even at this point of their evening! (Also, psst-your want transposed its 'n' to an 'h' and re-arranged itself ;))

Lovely work, BP! :)

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billpickle October 21 2009, 05:04:35 UTC
no heavy handedness here

I am in love with that description, just so you know.

I am running out of things to say to you Liz, everytime you leave me such a Lizzy review. Seriously. I love 'em all, but I'm running out of ways to thank you and tell you how much I really do appreciate your thoughts. Every single one of 'em!

OOH. And thanks for the catch. I'll be on my way to fixing that in a moment. ;)

*glomps you*

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lizook12 October 21 2009, 21:12:58 UTC
Awwws, well I appreciate you wanting to mix it up for me ;) Really, I can't seem to help myself when I find something so amazingly good (which is sadly very rare these days...)

Also, is that Lizzy like Booth's Boothy???

*glomps you right back*

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billpickle October 22 2009, 19:57:55 UTC
Also, is that Lizzy like Booth's Boothy???

Oh yes. Yes, indeed. :)

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thegryphin October 20 2009, 21:49:27 UTC
“And I'm about to kiss you again, Bones. And I want you to know that, the moment that happens? The moment I kiss you, wrap my arms around you and tell you that I love you? Everything that happens during and after that is ours and nobody can take it away from us. You hear me?”

“Nobody?”

“Nobody. Okay, Bones? Nobody.”

*sigh* This was so lovely! The dialog was truly spot on! Thank you so much for writing this tag, it was beautifully done and I'm all squishy and mushy from it now!!!! =)

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billpickle October 21 2009, 05:07:43 UTC
Thanks Gryph! I'm glad you like the dialogue! I've actually been tempted once or twice to do a dialogue only fic, but I just can't bring myself to actually writing one.

I just don't know what I would do, if I hit a spot and had no idea what I wanted them to say. :P

Thanks for the typically lovely review! I hope you're doing well :).

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youdontknowme October 21 2009, 00:23:59 UTC
Based on your actions right now and your words a few moments ago, I'd conclude that, yes, you indeed did what to kiss me.

such a Bones thing to say =)

i loved this. and i love them! and i love the state of their relationship right now <3

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billpickle October 21 2009, 05:08:55 UTC
Well, not that I fixed the "what" to "want". Yeah, I think it's definitely a Bones thing to say too :).

Thanks for reading!

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hoodie622 October 21 2009, 03:37:28 UTC
“Shhh. I just want you to feel this. I want us to remember what this- what us, feels like.”

This line is just beautiful, as is this fic.

Nicely done!

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billpickle October 21 2009, 05:09:18 UTC
Thanks! :)

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buffyangellvr23 October 21 2009, 03:45:47 UTC
aww nice :)

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billpickle October 21 2009, 05:09:35 UTC
Thank you! :)

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