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billpickle April 10 2010, 05:19:47 UTC
Booth would think that. That's what makes him Booth and that's why he is love.

Yes. That song was on repeat when I wrote this.

Also, did you catch it? The JM title? Totally meant for you.

:)

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billpickle April 10 2010, 05:29:39 UTC
You're killing me here. What with the fic awesomeness and the music.

This song is gorgeous. His voice is gorgeous in its simplicity. Thanks, hon!

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lizook12 April 11 2010, 01:48:35 UTC
The door swings open then and it feels like his whole life just comes crashing back in waves of colour.
That. The brilliancy and vividness of the color against the dark of mere sentences before is perfect.

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billpickle April 11 2010, 17:12:04 UTC
♥.

I really don't know what else to say. :)

Oh, and if you scroll up a little bit, M sent me a song. And it ended up being inspiration for this piece. You should give it a listen! I think you'll enjoy it.

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lizook12 April 12 2010, 00:34:29 UTC
Haah, she sent it to me the other night and I ♥ it. I love knowing that this piece started there...

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alias_jems April 11 2010, 21:10:51 UTC
The door swings open then and it feels like his whole life just comes crashing back in waves of colour.

LOVED this line.

Oh the angst!!!

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billpickle April 11 2010, 22:01:15 UTC
Thanks, Jems!

I'm sort of in this state of angst right now, but more and more, I'm letting a little bit of optimism shine through the cracks. :)

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dabhug April 12 2010, 16:22:31 UTC
You guys are just giving me hope. And I love you for it.

Come on, SHOW. Do it up right, please.

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billpickle April 13 2010, 00:25:32 UTC
It's a rather nice healing process isn't it? I mean, M and I (you can jump in here, if you'd like M. I'm just sayin') are enjoying this way too much for our own good. But at the same time, getting little tidbits of emotion out there is making our hearts feel good and giving us hope for the future.

So when it has the same effect on all you guys?

Well, that's just an added bonus. ♥

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labsquint April 17 2010, 16:58:35 UTC
sees the way she looked at him after he practically pushed her to fall. All this, before she told him she was ready to even think of jumping.

I love this. What a succinct way of describing how he rushed her.

The door swings open then and it feels like his whole life just comes crashing back in waves of colour.

This line particularly struck me. What a emotional way of describing how pale and drab his life has been the last two days when clearly all he needed was her. Nicely done...

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