Introducing Myself with a Story

[tariana]

Title: Second Rain of Autumn

Comments

[rospberry]

Aw, I REALLY liked this (apart from the huge lump in my throat I got near the end *smile*). I think your writing style is fantastic.

I especially loved this because it captured the moment/Joey's voice so well:

That’s why he shouldn’t be surprised (but he is, but oh, it’s a nice surprise and since when did Billy want him?) when Billy leans in, quick as a heartbeat, and kisses him.

Joey’s mind goes blank for a moment, and when it returns to functioning, somehow his fingers are twisted in Billy’s hair, and Billy’s hand is cradling the back of Joey’s head, and it’s (fucking amazing) so good, and then Billy says (moans) Joey’s name, and Joey is lost.

[tariana]

Thanks; I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and for commenting!

[kbfan]

Eeeee! That was sweet and yet sad...and awwwww. Btw, you captured Joey perfectly there as well.

[tariana]

Thanks for reading and for your comment; I'm glad you liked it.

I love your icon, btw.